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Your comments on the stakes are so delightfully helpful, as this is one of the most difficult things I'm trying to balance in the novel. I think I'm going to ...

OKAY so thank you so much for these reviews because they were super helpful (particularly because you were the only one so far who's really had the confusion problems, but ...

Ooooh, okay, this is helpful. Honestly, I probably should have guessed that this would be your reaction to Dameon and his opinions on the government. I won't say how much ...

Thank you as always! I'm really glad the characters are working because they're definitely the most tricky part. One of the biggest things I've been worried about is whether this ...

Thank you, as always! :D I'm particularly glad the balance of exposition worked here. To clarify - they were in the bunkroom, not the cockpit, and it's really small but ...

You're very welcome.

Thank you as always! I'm glad you're still enjoying the ride - I'm afraid you're kind of going to have to put up with a lot of minor inconsistencies or ...

Yes, the president is one of the dupes of Dameon's brother, though not his actual brother. I would have had him have more of a reaction, but he has gotten ...

Thank you very much! Yeah, I neglected to put a chapter summary, and I should really start doing that. No worries on not having much to say - you telling ...

Ooh yeah, I like the video chat idea! Physical presence adds a lot to a scene. And thank you for the kind works, they really do help.

Ah, that makes more sense! Thanks for clarifying. :)

Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you liked it. :)