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Oh good! I'm really glad I at least gave you something to think about. I like your explanation of the last line - I so often think of that line ...

Your very welcome! Glad it was helpful. :D

Yeah, for sure! PM away, or tag me. :)

(Also I feel the need to add that I am currently in the middle of reading two published books, one of which I really don't like, and one of which ...

Ooooh I didn't realize there were real supers in this world! I think you're right that the other stuff doesn't necessarily need to be really explicit in the text about ...

Ah, that's pretty interesting as a psyche, actually! Thanks for explaining, and you're very welcome for the review. :)

I know that's why you want the flashback, and that is a reason for its existence, but that doesn't mean it needs to be placed right here in the narrative ...

Okay, this is fascinating and really well-written. I have no idea why it hasn't gotten more attention. I'm too tired right now to review something of this quality very well, ...

Yay, I'm glad it was helpful! That totally makes sense about trying to jumpstart the plot. I look forward to it getting moving. :D

Thanks as always for the review! Re: Dameon and his guns - these guns aren't lethal at all, they're less powerful than tasers actually. They're stun guns, intended to briefly ...

You're welcome! I'm glad I could help.

You're very welcome!

Oh thank you! I actually entirely forgot that you got to be my 950th review!

Wow. This is really helpful. Like, your points about showing Dameon's life outside of work/the resistance is entirely correct - and you're also correct in suspecting he really doesn't have ...

I'm so glad I happened to see this on the View New Posts Page because it is not in my notifications anywhere. Thanks so much! You've given me some good ...