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Re: Listen, Love
Hey there, I'm here for a quick review. So, this is really very nice. I really like it. Your message is nice and clear, that the narrator is in love ...
Wed Sep 16, 2015 8:54 pm -
Re: One More Second
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, first off, I really like what you've got going here. The father has a nice strong voice, and we as readers ...
Wed Sep 16, 2015 2:56 pm -
Re: In A Heartbat
Hey there! I'm here for a review. It's always great to see someone starting a new novel, because those take a lot of work, but if you make it through, ...
Wed Sep 16, 2015 12:44 am -
Re: Rainy Home (Edited)
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. This is really a very sweet story about uniqueness. I really only have a few suggestions. 1. What's up with the odd ...
Tue Sep 15, 2015 9:12 pm -
Re: The Girl Who Wrote Symphonies
Hey there! As you know, I absolutely love your poetry, so of course I'm here to review it. Imagery I love the overall metaphor you have going here. It's very ...
Tue Sep 15, 2015 3:21 pm -
Re: Hiroshima Shadows
All right. I'm going to attempt to review this. I can tell there's a really good poem somewhere in here, but I'm just not getting it currently, and it's because ...
Mon Sep 14, 2015 8:19 pm -
Re: Cruel Kindness
Hey there! This is really sweet, I really like it. I'm assuming the narrator is a dragon? I only have a few comments, actually. Formatting Why the italics? It just ...
Mon Sep 14, 2015 2:09 pm -
Re: Tae Kwon Do - Polarities Between Countries and Cultures
Hey there! This is a really interesting article. I had no idea that Tae Kwon Do was so different in Korea. Overall, this is written really well. It's clear and ...
Mon Sep 14, 2015 1:26 pm -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 6.1
Here for another review~ Thoughts So, they have a traitor in their midst! Well, maybe not a traitor, but definitely an enemy. I'm sure we'll find out Cece's motivation eventually. ...
Sun Sep 13, 2015 11:21 pm -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 5
Wow. Just wow. I really like how you've incorporated the injuries he gets from the Void here. That's really quite worrying. Great way to build suspense. I honestly don't have ...
Sat Sep 12, 2015 11:29 pm -
Re: Colourful War
Hey there, thanks for requesting a review in my review thread. Let's get right to it. Theme I really like the overall metaphor of the piece. I haven't seen anything ...
Sat Sep 12, 2015 12:02 am -
Re: Disputatores- Chapter 1
Hey there and thanks for requesting a review, because I really need to pick up the pace if I want to do the RevMo challenge. (Also, we really should talk ...
Thu Sep 10, 2015 8:46 pm -
Re: Ruthless Killer | Unedited
Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review in my review thread. Let's get right to it, then. Initial Thoughts I really want to read this novel. If you ever regain ...
Wed Sep 09, 2015 10:20 pm -
Re: See Red, Hear Red, Feel Gray
Hey there, I'm here for that review I promised you! I'm actually glad you had something for me to review, because I've been running low on things to review lately, ...
Tue Sep 08, 2015 8:51 pm -
Re: Dreams
Hey there! I thought I'd drop a review on this nice little piece. You've got a lot of good ideas here - some compelling images, and funny references to fandoms. ...
Tue Sep 08, 2015 12:08 am
