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Re: What'm I Building?
Hey there! Let's get this out of the Green Room for you. So, I've never read the poem or heard of the author that inspired this, but I thought this ...
Sun Feb 21, 2016 6:35 am -
Re: 1
Hey there! I'm here for a review to get this out of the Green Room for good! So, you seem to have a solid plot and characters here, and overall ...
Sun Feb 21, 2016 12:19 am -
Re: Champions, The Citadel of Light: Chapter Two
Hey there! I'm here to get this out of the Green Room for you! So, wow, this is only chapter 2! Lots of stuff is happening already! But the good ...
Sat Feb 20, 2016 11:31 pm -
Re: Kite Runner Movie vs. Book
Hey there! I'm here for a review on this. So, essays. We all love to hate them, right? I'm going to assume you wrote this for school, and address some ...
Sat Feb 20, 2016 1:18 pm -
Re: The Way We Cope with That Thing Called Life - Part 3
Hey there! I'm here for a review on this. So, I went and read all of your parts, and I have to say, your writing is beautiful. Your paragraphs tend ...
Sat Feb 20, 2016 8:28 am -
Re: Don't know what I don't know....
Hey there! I noticed this work of yours was still in the Green Room, so I thought I'd come review it for you! So, this is my interpretation of the ...
Sat Feb 20, 2016 4:58 am -
Re: Ascent Chapter 6
Hey there! I'm back again. So, I'm still really enjoying this and I'm sad that this is the last part you've posted. But on to the review! So, the plot ...
Sat Feb 20, 2016 2:39 am -
Re: DUET :Chapter 12:
Hey there! I'm back. Let's get into this. Overall, I thought this chapter was good. I think you pulled off what is clearly a pretty important reveal fairly smoothly, and ...
Fri Feb 19, 2016 6:30 am -
Re: Fanfiction- chapter 3
Heyyy there! I'm back! So, this is another good part - your characters are still, by and large, in character, plot things are happening, etc. I really like seeing the ...
Fri Feb 19, 2016 1:42 am -
Re: Ascent Chapter 5
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. First off, I really like your first line. It's pretty clever and is a good character moment. Like the last chapter, this ...
Thu Feb 18, 2016 12:46 pm -
Re: FALL - Chapter Three - It Begins
Hey there! I'm back! I don't have as much to say about this part as I did the last one - overall I liked it more and it was written ...
Thu Feb 18, 2016 4:31 am -
Re: The Hidden World of Sleep and Stress
Hey there! I can't believe nobody else has reviewed this yet - I guess that's because it's just that good. So, yeah - I really like this, and it definitely ...
Thu Feb 18, 2016 1:44 am -
Re: My Life in a Bizarre Town: Chapter 4
Hey there! I'm back for a quick review on this part. First off, I see that it's rated 16+ already, but only for language. I'd recommend changing that to "mature ...
Thu Feb 18, 2016 1:18 am -
Re: Faith & Regret
Hey there! I'm here to get this out of the Green Room for you. So, I like spiritual pieces - they're nice, and I like the point you're trying to ...
Wed Feb 17, 2016 12:22 pm -
Re: The Odd Tales
Hey there! I'm here to knock this out of the Green Room for you. So, I definitely think it's cool that this is a script - I don't see many ...
Tue Feb 16, 2016 11:16 pm