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Hey there! I'm here to leave a quick review on this. So, overall, this isn't bad. Your humor is decent, and I can definitely relate to Eros about trying to ...

Hey, here for a quick review. So, overall I thought this was a pretty well-written story. Your description is quite nice, and I like the slow, contemplative air this piece ...

Hi there! I'm here to leave a quick review on this. I know you realize this already, but you're right - this is much shorter than the average chapter should ...

Hey there! Here for a quick review. So, this was really quiet enjoyable. It was rather intense, and I got a good strong impression of both characters. The writing was ...

Here there! I'm here for a quick review! So, overall, interesting start here. I think you have some pretty cool ideas. The main thing I noticed is that the tone ...

And now we come to the conclusion of this journey. It's definitely been interesting, and it's given me things to think about, regardless of whether or not I agree with ...

Okay, let's tackle this. So, although overall I agree with a lot more of the sentiments expressed here than in the previous part, this part and the last part still ...

Okay, let's get into this. It'll be interesting to see how this review plays out, as I'm am short on time but there is a lot I could talk about. ...

So, at first I was thinking this part wasn't very relevant to your overall thesis, but then I re-read the last few lines and realized that this actually sets up ...

All right. Let's get into this. Your first two sentences of #85 felt needlessly obtuse because of awkward wording. 86-88: I like your reasoning here - it's sound and well ...

Okay, so this part is a bit of an odd beast. It's very different from the rest, jumping around almost randomly. It also kind of throws ideas out there without ...

Back again. Something I was thinking about, but forgot to comment on, is that I think your definition of a psuedo-society is odd. Why does a society insisting that it's ...

Hey. Back again. You may wonder why, considering that I haven't been very positive about the other parts, but to tell you the truth, I'm a bit strange and I ...

Nooo! You stopped right when I was getting excited. ;-; First off, a small continuity thing - the last chapter ends with "He closed the door," referring to the man. ...

Hey, back again to review this second part. So, I thought this part was an improvement on the last, basically because everyone already has a general concept of what the ...