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Hello, hello! I like this part. The moon was just showing its shining face above the mountains, bathing the forest in eerie silver light. The shadows were long and twisted ...

Time for another review. :) This is a bit of a short chapter, so I don't think I have as much to say about it as previous chapters. I feel ...

Hey there! I'm back as usual. Also, I have in fact figured out that I misread the map and Zoltar is not flying back and forth between two different islands. ...

Ahh, so they weren't living underwater before but they are now. That makes a lot more sense. (Also, sorry in advance if this review is a little shorter, I'm running ...

Good morning! (Well probably evening for you.) He detested that everyone didn’t trust Shadow Talons just because of what they’d done centuries ago. So ooh, conflict. You're a lot more ...

Let's do this. I like that he's taking time to reflect now and I really liked that you took the time to build his and Felistia's relationship at the end. ...

Hello, hello. :) So I was wrong, not the surviving member, but another interesting side character. So, lots of information found out today, and it turns out the Wisp Talons ...

And back again. :) So, it really looks like either whatever attacked the group either did it to eat them, or they've been sitting there for several days. I'm inclined ...

Ooh, it's your namesake. Or are you her namesake? xD I really like Felistia. She certainly has an edge to her in the bitterness with which she speaks about her ...

Time for a reviewwwwww. I really enjoyed reading how Ilal and Anam reacted to the carnage. The only thing I might suggest is to bring Ilal's emotional reaction in a ...

Hello, hello. :) 'All this will be gone if I fail this mission and the Shadow Talons will go to war with the Moon Talons,' Zoltar thought, worry gnawing at ...

I'm basically doing one of these per day, in case you hadn't realized yet. :P The first part of this chapter, with Zoltar's inner reflection really lays the foundation for ...

And back again. And now the real plot starts, I presume, and it sounds like an interesting one. I was a little confused at first because I didn't realize that ...

Back again today. :) I think what I learned about Zoltar in this chapter is that he's somewhat rash, and can easily convince himself he needs to act - he ...

Hey there! I'm back for another review. I really like some of the in-world expressions, especially "suffering serpents' sake" because it rolls off the tongue and is fun to say. ...