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Ah, I like it, Logan's angry at Julia! She kind of goes through that emotion fast though, considering that this chapter is the first hint we get of her being ...

I really love this chapter. First, Marcus' viewpoint was *way* better than the last time - his voice felt a lot more unique and mature, and I felt like you ...

So I was right! She is going to walk again. That's definitely interesting, especially with the juxtaposition of her being healed, but also being turned into a monster that will ...

I really love all of Julia's reactions and feelings as she goes through this second wreck. You do a great job of showing her terror and her almost-flashback to the ...

Well, your poor characters don't get much of a break, do they? xD I like the short switching between perspectives - it really heightens the drama. I also liked that ...

So this is interesting. The jump from the last chapter to this one felt a little odd, and I'm not sure why. Perhaps because it starts with "it took hours ...

Hey there! I'm finally back to give you some more reviews. I've been really enjoying the last couple of chapters because stuff is happening and the mystery is unfolding. I'm ...

I'm finally here to review! I do really love this part. I love the insight we get into both Rila and Ilumi's characters, and the choice that she is presented ...

Hi Light! I'm back for another review. I like the insight we get into Rila's motivations here - she's been lied to about what's right, but she can't back out ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by with a quick review today. Firstly, you have some great ideas here. I love the inherent tension you open with, with that image ...

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Hey there! Thought I'd drop by for a quick review. I can't tell you whether or not your prologue is relevant/necessary just from reading only it - I'd have to ...

Hey there! Thought I'd drop by for what will unfortunately be a quick review since I'm short on time. I like Tamara - she was my favorite part about this ...

Hey Light! Can't see a work of yours without reviewing it.

Hey there! Thought I'd drop by for yet another review this morning. So again, I'm enjoying this quite a bit. I like how the mysteries are getting to be unraveled ...