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Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 7
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review this lovely review day! I was immediately pulled into the first part of this chapter, from the POV of Cecilia. The dialogue ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Shout!
Hey Elinor! This has been sitting in the Green Room for too long, so I thought I'd drop by and review it. I'm not *that* familiar with the Beatles, so ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: ~Suckers 3~
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this short but sweet chapter here. I thought the beginning of the chapter felt a little sudden, mostly ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: For Freedom/Three: The Auction
Hey Vivian! This hooked me right from the start, so I went back and read Chapters 1 and 2 and came back to this. 1. The plot is what hooked ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 4 Bonding
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this Review Day, since this piece has been sitting in the Green Room for far too long. This was ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: [Planning Chapter 13]
Now that I've gotten started with this, I decided I just want to go ahead and catch up rather than saving it for later. So I'm back again! Gael expected ...
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 12.2: Aleveri
Okay, so I decided to just go ahead and review the next part anyway. :D ‘May the Naturals permit,’ Aleveri replied. What are her thoughts here? Does she dislike being ...
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 12.1: Aleveri
Hey! Sorry for the delay in reviewing these - I should finish catching up in the next few days or so. I like Aleveri! I also like this chapter. It's ...
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 11.2: Ilami
Hey Light! You know the drill.
Dec 8, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 11.1: Ilami
Hey Light! Back as always for the review. You definitely did a better job showing the emotions of your POV character (in this case Ilami) in this chapter. Her pushing ...
Dec 4, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 10.2: Gael
And I'm back again. So wow. Now I'm wondering if Venaria wanted Ayesis dead for some reason and that's why she did that. Because I really don't understand why she ...
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 10.1: Gael
Hey Light!
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: Fluffs (part3)
Hello! I'm here to finally do the review you requested from me. First off, I apologize sincerely for the delay in getting this review to you. It's been a pretty ...
Nov 18, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Truths, Brazen Lies Chap. 6
Hey there, aj! thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely Review Day. First off, thanks for the summary at the beginning - I now remember the story ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Keeping It Together
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. Also, this is the second script I have reviewed today, which is a rare occurrence on here. First ...
Oct 29, 2017
