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Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 11
Hey, Thundah. I'm tired of seeing this back in the Green Room so I decided to review it for Review Day. I haven't read all of the previous chapters, but ...
Sat Dec 30, 2017 10:54 pm -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 7
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review this lovely review day! I was immediately pulled into the first part of this chapter, from the POV of Cecilia. The dialogue ...
Sat Dec 30, 2017 1:12 pm -
Re: Shout!
Hey Elinor! This has been sitting in the Green Room for too long, so I thought I'd drop by and review it. I'm not *that* familiar with the Beatles, so ...
Sat Dec 30, 2017 12:33 pm -
Re: ~Suckers 3~
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this short but sweet chapter here. I thought the beginning of the chapter felt a little sudden, mostly ...
Sat Dec 30, 2017 12:10 pm -
Re: For Freedom/Three: The Auction
Hey Vivian! This hooked me right from the start, so I went back and read Chapters 1 and 2 and came back to this. 1. The plot is what hooked ...
Sat Dec 30, 2017 12:38 am -
Re: Chapter 4 Bonding
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this Review Day, since this piece has been sitting in the Green Room for far too long. This was ...
Sat Dec 30, 2017 12:10 am -
Re: [Planning Chapter 13]
Now that I've gotten started with this, I decided I just want to go ahead and catch up rather than saving it for later. So I'm back again! Gael expected ...
Wed Dec 27, 2017 8:45 am -
Re: Chapter 12.2: Aleveri
Okay, so I decided to just go ahead and review the next part anyway. :D ‘May the Naturals permit,’ Aleveri replied. What are her thoughts here? Does she dislike being ...
Wed Dec 27, 2017 8:18 am -
Re: Chapter 12.1: Aleveri
Hey! Sorry for the delay in reviewing these - I should finish catching up in the next few days or so. I like Aleveri! I also like this chapter. It's ...
Wed Dec 27, 2017 7:51 am -
Re: Chapter 11.2: Ilami
Hey Light! You know the drill.
Fri Dec 08, 2017 1:01 am -
Re: Chapter 11.1: Ilami
Hey Light! Back as always for the review. You definitely did a better job showing the emotions of your POV character (in this case Ilami) in this chapter. Her pushing ...
Mon Dec 04, 2017 1:46 am -
Re: Chapter 10.2: Gael
And I'm back again. So wow. Now I'm wondering if Venaria wanted Ayesis dead for some reason and that's why she did that. Because I really don't understand why she ...
Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:36 am -
Re: Chapter 10.1: Gael
Hey Light!
Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:06 am -
Re: Fluffs (part3)
Hello! I'm here to finally do the review you requested from me. First off, I apologize sincerely for the delay in getting this review to you. It's been a pretty ...
Sat Nov 18, 2017 2:42 am -
Re: Hidden Truths, Brazen Lies Chap. 6
Hey there, aj! thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely Review Day. First off, thanks for the summary at the beginning - I now remember the story ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 10:27 pm
