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I like this, especially the title. It's good to read when you're feeling down. However, it is really vague. Often it's okay if poems are vague, but since this kind ...

You know you've written something good when it has 20 likes but isn't out of the Green Room yet. :D Your intro is great. The narrator has a great voice, ...

Just to start off, this is pretty cool. I like the idea you have here. I know I keep my English journals away from prying eyes. (Though that's more because ...

So, I admit to no familiarity whatsoever with the source material, so I apologize if I misunderstand something because of that. This first thing I can say about this is ...

Well, this sure is interesting. To get started, I think it's a good idea for a story. However, it needs a lot of work. For starters, it's far too passive, ...

Well, this was interesting for sure. I have to admit, I'm hooked. I love the futuristic sense this gives - the cat ears was a really nice touch. You've also ...

This is really good. It's chilling and rhythmic and you get your point across well. I really only have a few things I'd like to edit for better flow, and ...

Hi and happy Review Day! Let's get straight to the review. (And I apologize in advance for any typos, I'm typing this on my Kindle.) Overall, I really like this ...

Hi! I really like this story. The character development was spot-on, and overall it was really lovely and lyrical. I especially liked the Chinese terms you use throughout. Having him ...

Hello and happy Review Day! This is a really sweet story. I like it. You flesh out Chelsea and her world of ballet in such vivid detail. It feels so ...

Man, I love this. So, let's dive into this. I'm really not that great a poet, so take what I say with a grain of salt. I'm just going to ...

Wow, this is actually really good for a rant. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of Taylor Swift, but then again, I'm not a fan of most popular music. Even ...

I'm just going to leave a couple of quick thoughts, since most of what I wanted to say has already been said. First, I really liked this. Whatever the feminist ...

Hello! I'm here for a review. Now, I don't review.poetry all that often, but I hope I can still be helpful. First of all, in general I really quite like ...

Hi there! This is a cute story. I liked how you so accurately portrayed how he keeps switching from one topic to another. When I try to free-write, that's always ...