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Re: Chasing Normal
You know you've written something good when it has 20 likes but isn't out of the Green Room yet. :D Your intro is great. The narrator has a great voice, ...
Mar 5, 2015 -
Re: English: Intro
Just to start off, this is pretty cool. I like the idea you have here. I know I keep my English journals away from prying eyes. (Though that's more because ...
Mar 3, 2015 -
Re: Pyro's Adventure
So, I admit to no familiarity whatsoever with the source material, so I apologize if I misunderstand something because of that. This first thing I can say about this is ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: ASD-13
Well, this sure is interesting. To get started, I think it's a good idea for a story. However, it needs a lot of work. For starters, it's far too passive, ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: The post-perpetual world - Kannan
Well, this was interesting for sure. I have to admit, I'm hooked. I love the futuristic sense this gives - the cat ears was a really nice touch. You've also ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Dearest Stepmother.
This is really good. It's chilling and rhythmic and you get your point across well. I really only have a few things I'd like to edit for better flow, and ...
Feb 23, 2015 -
Re: Heroes Never Heal
Hi and happy Review Day! Let's get straight to the review. (And I apologize in advance for any typos, I'm typing this on my Kindle.) Overall, I really like this ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: The post-perpetual world -Ning
Hi! I really like this story. The character development was spot-on, and overall it was really lovely and lyrical. I especially liked the Chinese terms you use throughout. Having him ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: humdrum
Hello and happy Review Day! This is a really sweet story. I like it. You flesh out Chelsea and her world of ballet in such vivid detail. It feels so ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Revolution
Man, I love this. So, let's dive into this. I'm really not that great a poet, so take what I say with a grain of salt. I'm just going to ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Some Swift Defense
Wow, this is actually really good for a rant. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of Taylor Swift, but then again, I'm not a fan of most popular music. Even ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Are You a Feminist?
I'm just going to leave a couple of quick thoughts, since most of what I wanted to say has already been said. First, I really liked this. Whatever the feminist ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Placebo
Hello! I'm here for a review. Now, I don't review.poetry all that often, but I hope I can still be helpful. First of all, in general I really quite like ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: A story/essay
Hi there! This is a cute story. I liked how you so accurately portrayed how he keeps switching from one topic to another. When I try to free-write, that's always ...
Jan 31, 2015 -
Re: The Way to Nowhere
Wow! This was a really interesting and unique idea. I think it could have the potential to be a novel at some point. A few suggestions: so I borrowed my ...
Jan 31, 2015
