McMourning

Hi. I was 15 when I died and brought back to life, well I'm not really sure if I am human or not, I mean I still do the things ...

Hi, I think Lena and Juniper made some good points, but I wanted to tell you that I liked it. It is a little too short, though. It doesn't tell ...

To be honest, I don't have a clue about the show Total Drama . So, I can only really come at this from a grammatical and spelling perspective. Right from ...

I saw this post the other day, and it did make me get the book out of the library, but I think your review could have some more detail. You ...

Hi. I'm not sure if that part about pills fits with the rest of the poem, the reminiscing. I also found a few typos. If your computer doesn't have a ...

Hi. Your story was long, but it held my attention. It's interesting that the girl's stories can help her. I've sort of seen that before, in the movie Twitches , ...

Hi. I think the title is too generic. Anyone could write about what Christmas means to himself, but it isn't necessarily going to be religious. As for the poem itself, ...

Hi. I liked the beginning more than the end, because the end was different from the rest. One the first read through, I thought this line sounded like an ending. ...

I have to agree with Conrad. The ending was the only part I didn't like. Well, I don't like the salt water lips, either. You could remove both parts and ...

Hi. A sunlight basement sapped of all the warmth the sun brings. I believe it should be A sunlit basement zapped all of the warmth the sun brings. It's very ...

Wow. I like that it starts out sad, but turns to peaceful. That's not something I've seen very often. I remember a time long ago when you had hurt me ...

all this for wondering whether you kiss the way sugar melts I think this is what the whole poem is about. You went to all that work making dessert, wondering ...

Hi. And though I can name it in plain words, I cannot explain it. Love this line, because it's true. I think that everything here is well written. The only ...

Hi. Channon- Im sorry... *** *** for making you mad, for changing my mind, for being all talk, for making you think twice I like your comments about Luca's texts. ...

Hi. I think it reads better column by column. (I certainly wouldn't call that top to bottom. Then we'd read it, I an with... :) ) When read left to ...