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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Phantoms

    This is one of the most powerful poems I've read! I don't want to critique it, I just want to tell you how much this spoke to me. I think ...

    Nov 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: A Choice.

    Hi there! I've never heard of a pen and a knife compared before. I found that really gripping and I had to read more! It seems to me that this ...

    Nov 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: I:The Room

    WHAT?! You can't just leave us hanging! What?! Okay, while I am curious as to what this girls story is I did enjoy this a lot. Personally, I love characters ...

    Nov 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Queen of the Lilies

    Even though the photo isn't shown, you did such a great job painting the picture that I know exactly what it looks like! I never thought of a picture as ...

    Nov 21, 2014
  • Script » Narrative, General Re: LiveLaughLove

    Hello LuckyPanda2301! Judging from this passage I gather you are probably a very loving and free-spirited person! I really enjoyed the simplicity in this, the simple truth was refreshing. A ...

    Nov 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Daniel's Early Days

    Hi there! I'm new and I'm still getting the hang of this reviewing thing so please bear with me. XD Okay, well I'd like to start off by saying that ...

    Nov 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ambition

    Hey there! I'm still new to reviewing and I'm no expert on grammar so I think I will stick to reviewing the content if you don't mind! There are a ...

    Nov 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Fire and Ice

    I've been reading poems all day and this one is definitely my favorite. I think it's very clever and well structured......plus it rhymes! That is something that I thought I'd ...

    Nov 19, 2014


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