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Re: Phantoms
This is one of the most powerful poems I've read! I don't want to critique it, I just want to tell you how much this spoke to me. I think ...
Nov 24, 2014 -
Re: A Choice.
Hi there! I've never heard of a pen and a knife compared before. I found that really gripping and I had to read more! It seems to me that this ...
Nov 24, 2014 -
Re: I:The Room
WHAT?! You can't just leave us hanging! What?! Okay, while I am curious as to what this girls story is I did enjoy this a lot. Personally, I love characters ...
Nov 24, 2014 -
Re: Queen of the Lilies
Even though the photo isn't shown, you did such a great job painting the picture that I know exactly what it looks like! I never thought of a picture as ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: LiveLaughLove
Hello LuckyPanda2301! Judging from this passage I gather you are probably a very loving and free-spirited person! I really enjoyed the simplicity in this, the simple truth was refreshing. A ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Daniel's Early Days
Hi there! I'm new and I'm still getting the hang of this reviewing thing so please bear with me. XD Okay, well I'd like to start off by saying that ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Ambition
Hey there! I'm still new to reviewing and I'm no expert on grammar so I think I will stick to reviewing the content if you don't mind! There are a ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Fire and Ice
I've been reading poems all day and this one is definitely my favorite. I think it's very clever and well structured......plus it rhymes! That is something that I thought I'd ...
Nov 19, 2014
