MaxWagner

Can I date death? You make him sound so sweet. I like the pace of your poem. You don't make us move too fast, but it doesn't drag either. I ...

Well... not 100% sure what to say... I haven't a clue what you're talking about. The font, while a neat concept, and perhaps reminiscent of a person's handwriting, is very ...

After reading this about four times, I think I can say I like this. I've always called people books, but I like the way you compare them to plants. You ...

Whew. This piece is filled with an odd spattering of emotions. Good job! I felt several different things while reading this. In the first stanza, it was almost sorrow, then ...

Ok, cool. I like this. I have some issues with content, but I do like it. The feeling of freedom is one I crave, and reading about someone with flowing ...

Ok, so I just read Mary Shelley's Frankenstein. Your piece reminds me of Victor's reaction to the Creature. ... and also of how one would feel under the gaze of ...

You drew me in at the first paragraph. Hell, with the first two lines! Not gonna lie, after reading it a few times, it reminds me of a Taylor Swift ...

Entertainingly, my music selection for homework (that I should be doing right now...) is a two hour Celtic music compilation... and it fits perfectly with the feel behind your piece. ...

I've not read the previous chapters, but I'm planning to find them immediately after responding to this. If I'm making redundant statements, please excuse me. Natadova seems to be in ...