Mattie

What's with all the refrences to movies? Anyways, I really liked this. I think everyone else covered the crit. so I'll just leave it at that.

This reminds me of the movie...I love the movie Armagedon. Very touching...I love Liv Tyler. Well you did very good on this...hope to read more!

Good Job on this as many have said already. You made me feel like I was there as Ravenna had said.

This probably would have been better as a story but the poem fits it too. Good job...:)

Good discriptions. I could picture the Raven in my mind which is good since you're talking about an animal and some people can't discribe things that well in a poem.

Ohh...that was funny! Actually, halarious! I loved how you wrote that. It sounded like that one Bettle song which I can't remember the name to...anyways, can't wait to read more ...

I really liked this bcian. It was good and to the point. And I liked how you let the character (or you) veiw dying as and when or what will ...

I agree with Nate on this one. It was very pretty and a good read. Just make sure you fix mistakes that Nate had said there were and you'll be ...

Hey I liked this as well as everyone else said! I liked the ending though and thought you did a great job! Love the title too!

You should probably add that because that will confuse some people if they decide to read it.

Well, that's not all of the story and I never finished it. About two years old maybe?

Was she holding onto the towel that whole entire time? :)

It didn't happen to anyone, but I made it seem as it did, didn't I? :) I just thought that way of writing would be something new for me and ...

I too like this and hope to read more from you! I like the main character and the characters Sam had said she had liked. Your discriptions are vivid and ...

I found some more stuff that I skipped over when posting that part. Here's what you wrote: I turned and looked out over the weed infested yeard. What once had ...