Matthemus

i thought it was good, but needed work. you repeated yourself several times, and it was sort of confusing how all of a sudden there is a horrible storm, even ...

First off, I wish to say that you have a great title, in drew me in almost immediately. I like the idea you have come up with so far, very ...

Sorry it took me so long to review! Very busy lately! “Jin, I want you to understand something.” His voice was gentle again as he started to fix my clothes. ...

Amazing! I have always had a soft spot for samurai stories, and this hit it deep. It compels me to feel the character, and it makes me need more. When ...

The over all idea was good, I enjoy stories like these, I only edited a few pages of this, in the hopes you can get the repeated mistakes corrected yourself. ...

Countless majestic explosions littered the slowly rotating red Agamemnon, a star named after one of the ancient kings of old Earth. The solar winds caused by the explosions lashed out ...

Pin tugged on Mac hard, as gobs of cops lined up around the store. I groaned. Mac began to hesitate. “No one bothers a Recker, kid!’’ He shouted to the ...

“Men,” he said ,”show ‘em no mercy!” He brutally finished off the. Or rather, his team of four shot down the enemy. No, five. He led his team to the ...

Splendid! The way you tell they story is intriguing, and makes me (and by the looks of it, everybody else that has posted) want more. Nothing seems out of place ...

Great! Your plot is wonderful, and even though the speech is in a few places a tiny bit static, it keeps me pulled into the story. The conflict of the ...

Well, it was an interesting story at the least. There were certain grammatical errors that can confuse the reader a bit. And certain word misplacement's, but i would not worry, ...

Hi there! I thought this was a pretty good piece of work, and somewhat unusual, but in the good unique way. I have to admit i never thought i would ...