MattLangg

This is a great poem! I love where you got your inspiration from. It just goes to show that anything can inspire you, you just have to look at it ...

If You Saw the World How I Do, you would see that a single ice crystal, fallen from the sky, is a world on which I live upon. It melts ...

Ahhh I really liked this ^.^ I'm just guessing, but did you write on this topic because of personal experience? Or did something else inspire you? It sways in the ...

I absolutely adore this. It's short, sweet, and yet it has a booming effect on the reader. This is the powerful poetry that you see featured in literature books used ...

This was very pretty ^.^ I loved the random rhyming; it makes the poem seem so cute and innocent. Then again, love is it's best when it's innocent :D Keep ...

But, here's some grammatical things ^.^ What hurts the most Is what's untrue . The thing that's haunting Is me without you. Right now my world is perfect ; My ...

I remember reading this , I was such a fan of the series ^.^ I think you did an excellent job of summarizing the book in poem form! I really ...

I really liked this ^.^ The symbolism was my favorite! Just a few things: I’d like to be a star in the fallen sky, Watch the world change as time ...

I really like the message this is conveying ^.^ You can't be truly free, until you think in your head that you're free, very deep! Just a few things; Freedom ...

I absolutely love this ^.^ You build the listener's tension as the poem progresses, then the ultimate conclusion is magnificently crafted! A couple of things; You are the flower of ...

Thought I'd help with the punctuation ^.^ W e had a dream - of ruling all the seven seas . T he dream was fought for but we lost her ...

This is very unique! Just a few things I'd like to point out; Shoes Oh how many different types of shoes there are! They house your feet and cover your ...

This is very good, it reminds me of the hustle and bustle of a New York City street, but I don't know why. The only thing that I would recommend ...

O.o This started out okay, then it got intense. I don't know what else to say about something like this. I do like it, however. I enjoy how it has ...

Oh my, this story was absolutely magnificent. I started out reading expecting to stop halfway through. Instead, I couldn't even think about stopping! I love your sensory details, and the ...