MathiMouse

I just read your other poem "3", where I really admired your writing skill, and to my great pleasure, this poem is just as amazing in word-use and form as ...

For something so short, this is surprizingly emotional and "haunting". You have amazing form and rhythm, and I envy how easy it flows, and how well you've used the rhyming. ...

I really liked this poem, and I think you did a very good job with the form, and the rhyming-pattern, it gives your poem a strong flow. You have done ...

I really liked this poem, liked the almost creepy feel of it, of having all of these photographs staring down at you as you walk down the corridor. You are ...

I really liked this piece, and I like that you didn't really do any rhyming. Some people tend to think that a poem needs to rhyme to be a poem, ...

Hi, I really like this poem, it's very sweet, and even though this is very short, I like how clear it is. The feeling you're trying to create is very ...