Master_Yoda

Hey Conrad :) I read this yesterday, but didn't have time to review it. I did however give you one of those lovely stars though. So, anyway, let's drop in ...

Oh my, Georgia, this is truly wonderful. Your description is riveting, your prose strong, and your style magical. Just one or two suggestions that may or may not improve your ...

Hi Lil_Pau What a great start to a story! Let's see what we can do to improve it though... a mass of debris and destruction on the ground. Buildings looked ...

Hi there Selene, What... Oh, yes... I'm here to do a review. So, let's get started then. You know when you know what you’re doing is really stupid, but you ...

Hi There Overall, I'd have to say that this is a pretty nice piece. I hope that this review will manage to sharpen the image that you have tried to ...

Very nice Meep :) I don't like reviews that pretty much say "I loved this", but you should know that I love this. The relationship between the woman and the ...

Hi Sureal This piece of yours is fairly intriguing. This is quite strange as it seems to have no drive whatsoever. It seems to merely account a lucid dream. I'm ...

Hello once again Julie, Your story is clearly intriguing. And in this one, the paragraphing is good, and easy to read. So, let's review the piece itself. "Viva," the man ...

Hi there, Welcome to YWS! I hope you find your stay most pleasant. :) On with the review: I think that you write very nicely indeed. Your prose, while not ...

Hi Julie You haven't really given me much grammar to correct whatsoever. In fact, the only thing that made your story even a little bit of a chore to read ...

Hi jBlack_girl This piece is really short. It does, however, unlike many other pieces of its length give us a real lot to work with. So, hopefully after this review, ...

Hi there Johnny Welcome to YWS! In case you have not been informed, we do have a rule at YWS to ensure that everyone gets work reviewed. Before we post ...

Hey Peanut This was a pretty cute story. It doesn't make much sense, but it's not really meant to, so that is fine. One or two nitpicks: I am am ...

Hi There Let's get to the review: All down the streets Brigitta dances, joyfully and nonchalantly to the sound of the cappella melody played by the Piper. Is the word ...

Hello Sumi! You complain about your ability to hook, but you've done a great job here. :) There were only two things in the world a man like Edgar should ...