Master_Yoda

Hey Thirst, Firstly, I must commend you on the sheer entertainment value of this piece. You write a remarkably interesting prose, and I particularly like your story. Let's see what ...

Hey there White Tiger What an interesting username you have. Well, anyway, it's all the better for greeting you with. :) I must convey a certain delight at welcoming yet ...

I second the Alex Rider suggestion as suggested by Evi. I don't know if you're willing to go into adult spy fiction, but Daniel Silva is superb. Brad Thor and ...

Hey Jones, You are a pretty superb writer. :) I really enjoyed this piece, and would definitely read more of it. Your prose is strong, your style intriguing, and most ...

Hey Dragnet, I don't believe we've met at this stage. I might be wrong, I'm not sure, but in case I'm not, I'm pleased to make your acquaintance. :) So, ...

Hey Tifa, I don't think I've seen you around here before, so welcome to YWS. I hope you have a pleasant stay, and find the help here as good as ...

Hey Dudette :) Sorry I didn't have time to do this over the past couple of days, schools been really hectic but I have a bit of time now, so ...

Oh my, this is impressive. Let’s play house. I’ll be the loving wife that I’d always promised I’d always be for you, and you can be the adoring husband that ...

Hey there Light Devil! You are a devil! I'm not as confident about the light part... I read this, and couldn't help commenting. :) The slapstick humour with which you ...

Hey Dudette, Here's the review that I promised. The fumes were like acid on the back of my throat and I winced as another gust of wind whipped my hair ...

Hi Peanut, You are a marvelous writer. Your strong prose successfully paints a clear picture, giving us almost spooky chills down our spines. Only a couple of minor corrections and ...

Hey there wizkid :) You have a very intriguing start to your story here. I found it to be descriptive, but not overdone, and it read pretty well overall. The ...

Hey Dudette :) My, you do have an intriguing idea. All that remains is for you to make it into something great, because as much potential as this has, you ...

Avorpianikness, You seriously had me laughing with this piece. I've decided that the idea warrants a gold star. Let's take a look at some of the things we can work ...

Hello there Blinkasy, Welcome to YWS. I hope that you have a good time with us over here, and I also hope that we can help each other grow in ...