Master_Yoda

Hey Googleface, I don't believe I've seen you around here before, so allow me to just say that I am pleased to make your acquaintance. Just to inform you that ...

Hey Worx! Let's start the review, shall we? The first thing that I do want to point out is the fact that because you end in tragedy you need us ...

Hi Dudette, :) Well, let's get to the review then, shall we? After grabbing a tissue from my bag to try and stem my tears, I turned my back to ...

Hey Muffin Writer, :) Princess on the Doorsteps... Interesting title. I do think it is effective. It does tell a remarkably large portion of the plot though. Perhaps you would ...

Hey Dudette, Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this piece, but I've finally gotten around to it. As for your review on my piece, I'm extremely grateful ...

Hey Terpsichore, I've finally got to your review. Let's get right to it, then, shall we? My bare feet felt cold against the damp ground of our front lawn as ...

Hey Stelagineva, As requested, here is your review. I stood on the balcony admiring the lovely colors of dawn. While this is not an outright boring first sentence, it is ...

Helpful McHelpfulpants, I like the ring that username has to it. ;) It was glorious summer in the palace, though spring chill and dampness lingered on the city walls: the ...

Hi there Magnus, :) I'm sorry about the delay here. Unfortunately, my internet was quite uncooperative for several days. So, here I am reviewing your story a little belatedly. The ...

Hey Mimi :) Allow me to be your reviewer for today. Let's see what we can do with the piece, then. Lily watched as her best friend Logan scribbled something ...

Hey there Ariani, As promised, here is my review. :) I have lived a long time. I don't necessarily see this as a bad first sentence, but the potential that ...

Try the Sword of Shannara Trilogy by Terry Brooks. It's great fantasy. :) You might also try Trudi Canavan's The Black Magician Trilogy. It's pretty solid too.

Hi There Molham Krayem, Welcome to YWS! I hope that you find yourself at home here, and that you do get as much out of it as I have. :) ...

Hey There Worx! :) I really enjoyed the story, but that aside, here is the review that you asked for: There are three kinds of princesses. Not bad, but I ...

Hey Dudette, As promised, here's my full review of this piece: How dare she call me a kid! I’m seventeen after all, so I’m practically an adult. I suppose Declan’s ...