Master_Yoda

Oh my gosh. I have no idea what you intended the audience to get from this poem or even if you were sober when you wrote it, but it is ...

Wow. I really like this piece. I don't know what I would fix up. You had me at the word go, and despite the gaping lack of care with which ...

Macy, You are, I fear, too much of a philosopher. You discuss ideas in poetic structure, preaching that we should spend more time achieving our dreams than scorning those who ...

Sorry about the delay, but I thought I'd wait until review day. I suggest you pay close attention to Lauren's review. It is very well thought out, and provides some ...

Hey Elinor, Let us begin. Your writing has become magnificently rhythmic, and reading this I was able to glide through the prose effortlessly and focus on the story. I'm going ...

Hello Fred, I do not know if your name is in fact Fred or even if you are male, but calling you by a number feels uncomfortable, and your first ...

Are you trying to project a slow homicide onto me by making me read this poem? Because that's what you're doing...

Hey Confetti, You are a skilled writer who clearly wants real feedback, so I will speak candidly. Your writing is rhythmically exceptional, your word choice is consistently strong and emotive, ...

Hey Enigma, I know i didn't write this for a while, but suffice it to say I have been busy. Anyhow, without further ado, I'm going to give your story ...

Hello Zohali and Artemisathena, Once again, this review is for Zohali's review, but you know the deal Artemis. Feel free to listen in, although the bulk of this particular review ...

Hello Threnody, Here is your requested review. The star that I gave you is for the story from Hannah's perspective. That part was very interesting to read, and I was ...

This is very funny. Don't listen to Kyllorac or Rosey. Perhaps it could use with some more imagery, but you have to keep this as a poem. It is only ...

Nope, no intrigue for me. You begin with a somewhat arrogant character knocking the crap out of a couple of his assailants. I should wonder why they're after him, but ...

Hello Blues and LemonyIce, This review is written for Blues, and I have limited knowledge of poetry, but feel free to listen in, Lemony as it might just help some. ...

Hey JP, I don't suppose I will ever convince you to trade in your stylistic approach for a more story driven one. That's a pity really, because you write rhythmically ...