Master_Yoda

Yo Fledge :) So, the plot thickens. :) We now know that Mr Cat and the Teddy Bear are doing something rather strange. We just don't know what yet. I ...

What a deep and profound poem. The fact that the word "shy" rhymes with the word "why" is in and of itself an anomaly. The usage of uppercase further conveys ...

This, good Rosey, is a really marvelous piece. Let's do some line by line stuff: The floor shimmers as light filters in through the water above. I rather like this ...

Yo Zerk, Here's my promised review. I do hope that you find it useful. The voice of your narrator is what really drew my attention to this piece. It is ...

Orson Scott Card is officially one of my favorite authors. In fact, while I love Ender's Game, what is even more impressive is his book Speaker for the Dead which ...

Hi Joshua Paul :) Occasionally I read a story on YWS which is so good that I just have to comment. This was one of them. From the very first ...

Yo Rosey, It's been a while since I reviewed anything of yours, so I thought that since I really liked this piece I'd drop in with a quick critique. :) ...

I haven't read this, but I intend to buy myself several of Sanderson's books for myself at the first opportunity. Everything I've read of his is awesome. He's got that ...

Hey Hero, Here's my promised review: Honestly I think this premise of yours is awesome. You have perfectly captured my attention, offering just enough mystery to make me ask the ...

Skybreaker wasn't bad. I mean I liked the premise to a certain extent but the author, Oppel, did a couple of really stupid things like making that gas Hydrium smelling ...

Yo Dog! After your very helpful review on part of my story Dreams of Giants, I thought I'd return the favor. Epic Fantasy! One of my favorite genres. Let's get ...

Yo Fledge :) I actually don't think this was your worst bit at all. I think this is what I'd been waiting to see. Ted starting to really mess with ...

I don't know what to say Fledge, but I gave you a gold star. It is very rare that a short story leaves me so speechless. I have one or ...

So, NewHero, let's give you a bit of a review. I'm in an orderly mood, so let's start at the beginning. :arrow: Hooks: Hi there, my name is Eric. I've ...

Yo TNG I'm Yoda, and will try provide you with a bit of help on your story. So, I guess the first thing that we start off with should be ...