Mars

Thanks everyone for the reviews! @lavabubblingout: I did capitalize it. About the "sk i p s" line, I actually meant to do that-I get an interesting sound inside my head ...

Well. Okay. I love grammar. I really do. It's excellent and I know how annoying it is when people don't use it. However...I just don't like my poetry capitalized. It's ...

AHHH COMMA SPLICE!!! yes. i will definitely fix that. :D About the mask line: I see what you mean. I like 'mask' because it's one syllable, so I thought it ...

Thanks for the critique--after reading it again I get exactly what you're saying. I pretty much cut out the entire first half.

thanks! i wanted it to be light/amusing/smug. now i feel like it should be more...serious? and i guess the title fits...but i don't know.

this is excellent! my history teacher had us do something like this as well, but not about mitosis of course. :lol:

I liked this. Yeah, the title did make me think of an emo song or poem, but I clicked on it anyway and I'm glad. I love how descriptive you ...

2-3 were fantastic, I especially liked 3. Have you ever tried tonkas? They're sort of like haiku, a bit longer though.

I'm jealous you can write like that and I'm jealous you can surf. I love it. Just wish it was longer, so I could read more.