Mars

This haiku IS 5-7-5 actually. Haha, that wasn't very clear of me. I know yours is 5 7 5; what I was saying is, yes, that means it is a ...

Moved to Other Poetry. :) Locked. Please only post poems once.

Heya! I haven't read Dudette's review so sorry if I repeat anything ^_^ Now, most kids weren’t even out of bed at seven forty-five in the morning, but for the ...

Back as requested. ^^ the tips of it was so blonde it looked white Should be were so blond, as tips is plural. I think you could also cut out ...

I'm back. =D then a town rose up out of no where. *nowhere (one word) They grasped Miss’ wrist, and [s]upon seeing it was fine,[/s] let her go. I'd cut ...

Hello again, Sura! Sorry it took me so long, but I'll try and elaborate/help/reply to your reply to my reply. :) Do you have any thoughts on how I could ...

But I have reason to believe that this is the doing of a Crumple-Horned Snorkack, which Potter must have encountered. Tee hee. Lovely.

You guys all completely rock. I'll get on editing this soon.

Ooh! Lovely improvements, Zakku. And (eep) it's Friday the thirteenth in three days! DO NOT GO TO THE MOVIES. So! Anyway, I did notice a few little errors that I ...

This conversation sounds way too familiar. I LOL'd. :D This isn't a review, because I have no suggestions! Nice work. *star*

The World is Flat by Thomas L Friedman. He's just completely, completely wrong about everything, and the worst part is that he seems to have my global studies teacher convinced.

As promised, finally! RESPONSE TO YOUR RESPONSE TO MY RESPONSE Also, I am definitely having a hard time deciding between Mrs. Maveo and Lily. I vote for Mrs. Maveo (and ...

Hi Vox! Here as you requested - sorry it took so long. Let's start! The first thing I want to say is that proper formatting would make this easier to ...

Hello Hayley! ktw here as requested. Forgive me if I repeat something one of the other reviewers said, but I'm too lazy to read their comments. :) Let's get started, ...

Hello Hayley! ktw here as requested. Forgive me if I repeat something one of the other reviewers said, but I'm too lazy to read their comments. :) Let's get started, ...