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Re: 5 Years
Aaaand I can't believe that this happened. Somehow I didn't see this one coming... (Trying as hard as possible not to spoil the story for anyone who will read the ...
Jul 2, 2016 -
Re: Chapter One
Racism... Best material for a dramatical story to say the least. For half of the time I thought she was a boy xD because do military fathers make their daughters ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Regret
Well this story was short, but it was written well. :) To be honest I did get a little confused at the end, when she walked to the railing and....started ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Moon's Whispers [Clary]
And the good old werewolf stories that everyone missed, it was a nice short story, yet I think the end is missing something... Over all the plot in this shirt ...
Jun 6, 2016 -
Re: Vampires Will Never Hurt You
This piece gives me a lot of feelings about it to be honest, but now i'll talk about the "plot" in this. First this is inspired from a song, good ...
Jun 6, 2016 -
Re: Burned 7.2
Hello! I'm Mari! I'm here to review! Holdy hell where are we?! Iraq?! WW2?! Not even one line and we are already under attack from military planes and bombs, strong ...
Jun 4, 2016 -
Re: Starlight: Prologue
Hello! Im Mari, and I will make a review on the plot and dialog of this polog ^^ (since I'm bad at grammar myself) The prolog till now sound very ...
Jun 4, 2016 -
Re: Prologue to : The End
I'm sorry, what is this?. I don't remember novel's prologs being so short and barely scratching the surface, the prolog should be at least ten lines my dear, also very ...
Jun 4, 2016 -
Re: Sin and Death
As I reached the end I was like "...what?" To be honest I was left very confused at the middle, from talking to a shrink to an explanation about abuse ...
Jun 3, 2016 -
Re: Nana
Impressive, I'm in love with they hallucinate :) Yet I think it was obvious a bit (probably because I read that much of script and stories lol) But I love ...
Jun 3, 2016
