MariaRowlands1

I have no idea what to say. This chapter is quite a mix of distress and disturbance. I am quite confused about the mother. Is she meant to say she ...

This was meant to be a review. I like this chapter better than the other two. Esspecially the end. Nice touch. It's rather interesting but also it enchants the mind ...

This is quite a good story but I can't see the connesction between the characters and Angels. To me this story just looks like it's a bit mixed up. Esspecially ...

Nice! Though I don't understand exactly what is happeneing. If she is falling then why isn't her wings working. I understand the whole idea that the Fallen don't get the ...

Okay. I like this but I have one question. WHERE ARE THE OTHER TWO ELEMENTALS!? I mean come on! You can't just start it with 2 of the 4 main ...

As I said before. You need to describe the other world more. I am still really confused by what Penelope and Derik look like and their personalities should be described ...

This is quite a good story! I like it! I just am curious about the other world. What is it really like? I honestly believe you should have had the ...

This is quite amazing.You managed to keep me on my toes, wondering what will happen next. Though it was obvious that the Headmaster was a perv to most girls I ...

Wow is all I have to say, that's for sure. This story is really quite exceptional. The Headmaster sounds quite creepy though. I think it's too early to add in ...

This is amazing! I don't believe there is any spelling mistakes. To me, story writing is about creativity and fun, not if you have the correct spelling or grammar. That ...

I can't wait to read more of this story. It is quite clever and has got me wondering what will happen next. Not many stories have completely captured my imagination. ...

Wow! That was quite amazing! Who would have expected the ending to that! You have quite an exceptional talent and this story is showing it all in it's glory! I ...

THAT WAS PERFECT! I have been searching for a story with true fantasy and SciFi action for quite a while! You have captured my attention, Sir. Something in the title ...

This story is rather interesting. It has a great storyline and tells the story quite plainly but I do have an issue. The story is not entirely exciting, I would ...

Wow! The chapter shows a new side of the whole moving from a castle to normal world difference. It's rather amazing. It shows it can be enjoyable and fun. You ...