MargoSeuss

Hey Void14! This is Margo Seuss here for a review. I'm a sucker for dedective stories, so your title "The Art of Deduction" got my attention right away. The first ...

Hello, artemis. This Margo Seuss here for a review. This is truly an imaginative piece. I have to admit, I was a little lost with all the jargon going on. ...

Hey, WaltzingDreams. Margo Seuss here for a review. You did a great job portraying the aura of one with a broken soul. Your words drip with melancholy...which is good! It ...

Hi there, Musicinme. Margo Seuss here for a review. I love the way you started this poem. As I sat down next to you, my heart exploded. My body burst ...

Hey, R2TheR. This is Margo Seuss here for a review. These chapters have great character development. A seventeen year old delinquent genius certainly is an interesting mix. His character almost ...

Hey, Monster. Margo here for a review. This poem is gritty and yet romantic at the same time. The juxstaposition of it is invigorating somehow. I automatically give you points ...

Another great chapter. I sense a little forbidden romance in the future of Ted and Andromeda. You've done a spectacular job at distinguishing Andromeda's character. Clearly she is a miserable ...

Hi, artemis. Nice first chapter. Surprisingly, I can't say I've come across too many Harry Potter fics (is that the right term) here on YWS. As a fellow Potter fan, ...

Hey, Tealeaf! Awesome chapter! You had me wrapped completely in your web of action. Good job at capturing the audience's attention. I have one suggestion for you. Throughout this chapter, ...

Hey, Johanna. This really beautifully written. As the reader, I can see exactly what you were going for here. For me this was like a moment so full of emotion, ...

Hello, Rurouni. Margo here for a review. I think this is an original twist on the ever growing popularity for vampire literature. It's whimsical...yet dark. Two perfect adjectives. Seeing as ...

Hello, Utopia. MS here for a review. I like that you gave the reader just enough information in this chapter. After reading this chapter I'm left wondering what Wendy's mission(at ...

MS here for a review. Beautiful work. This is different than what I had envisioned from the title. I was thinking this would be a comparison to how you need ...

Hi, there! Margo Seuss here. I commend your use of humour and rhyme in this piece. 'Storage, forage' :D Good one! I think we have a similar style of poetry. ...

Margo Seuss here for a review on this fine Halloween Christmas. First of all, I would like to congratulate you on portraying a hopeless atmosphere with your writing. Phrases like ...