Mangledsoul

Thanks for you review, Alex. Glad you're back. While I'm really grateful for your suggestions, I'd like to tell you my pov n the essence of this poem as well. ...

It is not AI. I'm an artist too and I'd never use AI to review someone's work, I read it so many times n now I understand why it maybe ...

Nah because THIS feels like the kind of poem you read twice and then just sit there staring at the ceiling for a minute 😭 The imagery here is actually ...

This feels like one of those poems that doesn’t fully explain itself but still hits somehow. Like you read it and your brain just goes “wait… hold on” 😭 The ...

Thanks for the review sara. What I'm comparing in the khushiya part is the two types of happiness, one that YOU get from people from whatever they've done for you ...

Thank you so much Shakthi

Thank you so much for the review HKumar. And also for the formatting tip. I tried many times but couldn't break it into stanzas.

The pleasure's all mine...

Thank you Alex. Glad you enjoyed it...

Thank you for the review again Alex. Sayanon means wise or intelligent people. Also I'd definitely use your suggestions. I usually write in more of a local hindi than pure ...

Thanks for the review cocteau. However I don't think I've overgeneralised or oversimplified anything. I think you saying "in reality it varies widely" proves all this critisism after, pointless but ...

This poem honestly hurts in a quiet way. Like it doesn’t scream pain, it just sits there and makes your chest feel heavy. The whole tomato flower thing? Sounds simple ...

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This poem honestly hurts in a quiet way. Like it doesn’t scream pain, it just sits there and makes your chest feel heavy. The whole tomato flower thing? Sounds simple ...