Mandorelute

Alright, Mandorelute, she's a young woman, and you're REALLY going to give her that huge of a critique? Seriously? Calm down. Not everybody can be writing geniuses like you. I ...

I am impressed. Thank you for hearing me out without getting defensive. I really believe that you have a lot of talent. I don't know which poet or poem you ...

I thought your poem interesting. I had a hard time reading the blue font, but once I started - I understood. It took me there. Well done.

So intense a love poem that I felt embarrassed, as if I were a mailman accidentally intruding on two making love... " fell breathless and vaulted arms-- flesh and melee-- ...

Did you change it just...now? The ending? Honestly, I couldn't tell, I thought that was metaphor, parallel imagery. Love is war. ;}

Theme of the Runaway You’re the kinder branches long dream’t of from her compass of windows, with her green eyes made for looking out, processing the predictable: In the end, ...

Babs, chills like 'Mufassa!?' Are you sure? That has to be the greatest thing I've ever heard. Yellow Scar: I see what you mean. It is, a yellow scar that ...

Sistanuuk: Thank you for taking the time to read this and critique it. I'm glad you liked the references. Hm, how to explain the 'keep' line...part of me resists going ...

Again, an edition, with Suzanne's awesome aid: The sky is an eyelid, weeping of Furies and Sorrows; but eyes are more honest than this: lies cannot sincerely smile, lies cannot ...

Edited version: The sky is an eyelid, weeping of Furies and Sorrows; but eyes are more honest than this: lies cannot sincerely smile, lies cannot speak symphonies of wordless thought ...

Sista Nuuk: Thank you. I'd be happy to discuss poetry, as long as it isn't just my poems we talk about. Oh, heart - waning heart, sinking with the need ...

"Still we attempt to avoid Wading through memoirs, Unable to accept this metamorphosis. Pray for a white-knuckled release and the chance to resurface." This is an awesome way to end ...