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Re: [Rewrite] Mr. Right
Uuugghh this is creepy. I personally adore short suspense stories, so this got me right away. As far as grammar and spelling, I can't see any errors. There might be ...
Nov 22, 2014 -
Re: Guardian
This was a very interesting piece. It makes me want to learn more about the characters involved. This piece itself is very well written, no spelling or grammatical errors I ...
Nov 22, 2014 -
Re: Quint.1.
Heeyy!! :D Content wise, I find no issue. One issue I have with science fiction is that it all has very similar stories and is fairly repetitive, but you're managed ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Creamag: Curse of Scropvitis
Hello! :D This prologue is very straight and to the point in it's narrative. I personally find that prologues capture a reader's attention most if something really HAPPENS in it, ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: You Were Mine Once
Oh goodness this is creepy. I highly enjoyed this short but enrapturing piece. I must say, twist endings are a soft spot of mine, and I could tell you were ...
Nov 18, 2014
