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Malefica

Malefica

  • Other » Other, Mystery / Suspense Re: [Rewrite] Mr. Right

    Uuugghh this is creepy. I personally adore short suspense stories, so this got me right away. As far as grammar and spelling, I can't see any errors. There might be ...

    Nov 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Guardian

    This was a very interesting piece. It makes me want to learn more about the characters involved. This piece itself is very well written, no spelling or grammatical errors I ...

    Nov 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Quint.1.

    Heeyy!! :D Content wise, I find no issue. One issue I have with science fiction is that it all has very similar stories and is fairly repetitive, but you're managed ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Creamag: Curse of Scropvitis

    Hello! :D This prologue is very straight and to the point in it's narrative. I personally find that prologues capture a reader's attention most if something really HAPPENS in it, ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Other » Horror, Other Re: You Were Mine Once

    Oh goodness this is creepy. I highly enjoyed this short but enrapturing piece. I must say, twist endings are a soft spot of mine, and I could tell you were ...

    Nov 18, 2014


'They are afraid of nothing,' I grumbled, watching their approach through the window. 'Together, they would brave Satan and all his legions.'
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights