Maki-Chan

this is a really nice poem. But I'm confused- not by your peom but by the fact I have -500 points.

WOW! THis was really great. I'm not very good at poetry, so I won't tell you what to do. other than the fact that I loved this ^_^ Keep it ...

Ashleyless-chan I'm sorry to tell you, but I am wrapped up tightly in school work. I haven't been able to write for my story. I will have it down, but ...

Glad I can't envy them that. doesn't make sense to me. other than that good job ^_^

this was an awsome peice of literature. I can't point anything out that needs to be fixed. ^_^

I liked this ^_^ If you just correct what TN pointed out. Also just do spell check. Nice job Amber ^_^ ~Maki-chan out!

thank you. The questions you asked will be answered. THe way Tera didn't like Chase was a strange feeling. Something about him makes her not trust him. hope this helps ...

? Should I just keep it the way it is?

^_^ I'm glad you liked it Panda-chan. I rewrote that one sentence. I hope that its better than before.

thanks, I hate chapter one. I'm probably going to remake it.

space out please ^_^

This is better. There were a few mistakes, but the written work was a lot better than before. Nice job. "I can't beleive you let that happen!" she heard her ...

SWEET!>_< I knew chapter 2 was better than chapter 1. ^_^ I'll work real hard on chapter 3.

I'll try to patch this up, but when I wrote this- Chapter 1 was very tough for me. Please don't get discouraged by this- chapter 2 is alot better. The ...

Summerless I have chapter 1 down. Its not very good, but chapter 2 is going to be a lot better. ^_^