Maki-Chan

In the beging part its after all this stuff happened. You'll learn how and why she's here. In the 1st part and the beging of chapter 1 she's a totaly ...

Alright thanks. I still think I am getting better. I just hope I can do it. :D

.............oh ok........thanks :D

I enjoyed it. Its a little bit of a different view of a hero. I liked it. PART2! PLEASE!!! :o

i'm not very good at peoty, so i'll try harder and i'll probably rewrite it! thanks for the truth. :)

Thank you! I could not spell that really big c word! Thanks! SO! MUCH!!! ohh yah well thanks for the wonderful oopsies pointers! Much apreasheated...can't all.... :shock:

Thanks I'm trying my best! If you want to review another original book of mine look for "The Forgotten One"! :lol:

Thanks you guys fpr the kind words you said! I'm not a very good speller so please endure! SORRY! ps school is a place where they eat your SOUL!!!!

this is cool. I like it. That usually happens when your all alone and abandoned! Oh well i like it! :twisted:

ok so its been a while since i wrote a poem and i'm a bit rusty! SORRY! But its ok i was kinds sad when i wrote it and i ...

Ok i will try my best. As you know i just started and i'm not very good. I think i will post a nw version to fit your advice! :) ...

this is my farest story so far at 5 chapters in written form. I understand i am not very good at spelling or typing, which would exsplain the many mistakes! ...

well this story is interesting and you use words very well TheEccentricScribe. The people talked very fansty. I liked the 1st paragraph talking po huminity. Bravo!^_^

wow..(speechless) this is a very interesting poem. Its long but good. I enjoyed it! :roll:

nice and simple. I like it! :D