MagmaLlama

Boom, it's Magma! First up, this is an overall cool story. It's well written, with a good story and I simply love the ending. One random fact to end a ...

Boom, it's Magma! This story was... Short. That's alright, though. It's an alright short story, but it's a bit flat. Some people go into Maccas, don't have enough money, and ...

Boom, it's Magma! I think that this is a pretty good piece of story, but there are a few problems. The first is: she sees a pack of giant, sick ...

Hello! First of all, I think that writing about noms is- WAIT WHAAAT? MY AUTO CORRECT CHANGES 'NOMS' TO 'MOMS'????? DUDE, I'M AUSTRALIAN!!!! Sorry about that, I was just throwing ...

Hello! It's Magma here to review this fine poem here! This is an awesome poem, but I just have to get one thing out of the way: The second verse. ...

Hello. This is a pretty good poem, but some of the rhymes are a little meh and the poem needs a bit more rhythm. I love the bits between the ...

Hello. I've read the review Ignorance left and I don't have that problem, but instead I have something that looks a bit like this scattered through the story: ]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]

When you said "I apologise in advance", I was expecting this to be terrible, but it's actually not that bad. I like the repetition in the first and last paragraphs. ...