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Re: Chapter 2: Alice in Horrorland
I loved the first chapter of this story, and the second was just as enticing! I love that you aren't completely following the original Alice in Wonderland storyline, because now ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: The Cards Dealt Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 (sorry it's so long)
Well believe me, Marcia's story is definitely dark. The story gets worse before it gets better, just a warning
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: The Cards Dealt Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 (sorry it's so long)
Well I didn't grow up like that, but I know kids that did which inspired this story. I hope I'm getting it at least somewhat right!
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: The Cards Dealt Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 (sorry it's so long)
I was trying to show that the kids had no parental guidance so they came up with very unrealistic events, and I tried to make it as extreme as possible. ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1: Alice in Horrorland
I've always loved Alice in Wonderland due to it's use of imagination. I feel that this story could have a lot of imagination, even if it is dark. The plot ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Dreamer - Chapter 1
I like the plot of this story a lot. As children, people usually do dream of wondrous places such as Angel does, and it's easy to relate; it can bring ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: The Man in the Cubicle
I loved all of the description and adjectives that you used in this story! The plot itself is good because it kept me interested throughout the entire story, wondering what ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: The Cards Dealt Chapter 1
I was inspired by S.E Hinton's "The Outsiders" when I wrote this. I absolutely adored the name Sodapop, and had to use it!
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: An Ode to Google
This poem is so cute! It might not be highly sophisticated, but that doesn't mean it's bad. Sometimes it's really nice to just read a poem for the sheer joy ...
Apr 19, 2015 -
Re: I'm Going to Apologize to Anyone who Reads This
There is no reason for you to doubt your writing ability. This poem is reality good! It might not be super long but that's okay because you get the point ...
Apr 19, 2015 -
Re: I'm Going to Apologize to Anyone who Reads This
There is no reason for you to doubt your writing ability. This poem is reality good! It might not be super long but that's okay because you get the point ...
Apr 19, 2015 -
Re: Gifted: Chapter 2 Chad
I really like how you kept the story lines close together so that they made sense, but gave them the different perspectives. The plot is still really interesting to me, ...
Apr 19, 2015 -
Re: Gifted: Chapter 1 You've got to be kidding me?
I love the plot of this! The story line is so interesting, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Gifted: Chapter 1 You've got to be kidding me?
I love the plot of this! The story line is so interesting, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Apr 18, 2015