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Re: Filtered
Thank you so much for your review! I admit I had to reread the poem again so I could remember everything that I was intending with it. :P Thanks for ...
Fri Sep 13, 2019 11:19 pm -
Re: Halloween
You're welcome! I apologize if it felt awkward reading your old stuff after seeing this review - I just couldn't resist. :P
Fri Sep 13, 2019 12:33 pm -
Re: The Brightest Witch of Her Age
Shoot! I just realized I forgot to add something - you switch from past to present tense in the poem. That's another area where you can revise.
Thu Sep 12, 2019 9:23 pm -
Re: Oh, what a wonderful thing
That's a mood.
Tue Sep 10, 2019 11:18 pm -
Re: Oh, what a wonderful thing
Oh, that's cool! Now that I think about it, I am starting to see the differences in how you're writing the two of them - especially with how Megara's been ...
Tue Sep 10, 2019 11:12 pm -
Re: Rain | 3 Haiku Poems
You're welcome!
Thu Sep 05, 2019 8:27 pm -
Re: Math
You're welcome!
Thu Sep 05, 2019 7:58 pm -
Re: Deleted
You're welcome!
Thu Sep 05, 2019 7:50 pm -
Re: Snickers
You're welcome!
Thu Sep 05, 2019 7:50 pm -
Re: Life: Spider Web
You're welcome! I'm glad I could help.
Thu Sep 05, 2019 7:50 pm -
Re: The Plight of a Flu Victim
You're welcome! I'd be happy to help as much as I can - I'm not sure how well I can shorten them, but I can try my best. :)
Fri Aug 16, 2019 6:40 pm -
Re: Things I'm Bad At
I was going to comment on how much I loved the imagery, but I love the message even more. I just find it to be really relatable.
Wed Jul 24, 2019 7:43 pm -
Re: crushing
Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem, and I'm happy to see that you're already figuring out how to use the site.
Thu Jun 20, 2019 11:39 pm -
Re: an island story
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I guess I know who to tag if I ever write more Riku-centric poems.
Sat Jun 15, 2019 11:57 am -
Re: crushing
Thanks for your review! I'll definitely keep your comments in mind when revising this piece in the future.
Sat Jun 15, 2019 11:56 am