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Re: Filtered
Thank you so much for your review! I admit I had to reread the poem again so I could remember everything that I was intending with it. :P Thanks for ...
Sep 13, 2019 -
Re: Halloween
You're welcome! I apologize if it felt awkward reading your old stuff after seeing this review - I just couldn't resist. :P
Sep 13, 2019 -
Re: The Brightest Witch of Her Age
Shoot! I just realized I forgot to add something - you switch from past to present tense in the poem. That's another area where you can revise.
Sep 12, 2019 -
Re: Oh, what a wonderful thing
That's a mood.
Sep 10, 2019 -
Re: Oh, what a wonderful thing
Oh, that's cool! Now that I think about it, I am starting to see the differences in how you're writing the two of them - especially with how Megara's been ...
Sep 10, 2019 -
Re: Rain | 3 Haiku Poems
You're welcome!
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: Math
You're welcome!
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: Deleted
You're welcome!
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: Snickers
You're welcome!
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: Life: Spider Web
You're welcome! I'm glad I could help.
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: The Plight of a Flu Victim
You're welcome! I'd be happy to help as much as I can - I'm not sure how well I can shorten them, but I can try my best. :)
Aug 16, 2019 -
Re: Things I'm Bad At
I was going to comment on how much I loved the imagery, but I love the message even more. I just find it to be really relatable.
Jul 24, 2019 -
Re: crushing
Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem, and I'm happy to see that you're already figuring out how to use the site.
Jun 20, 2019 -
Re: an island story
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I guess I know who to tag if I ever write more Riku-centric poems.
Jun 15, 2019 -
Re: crushing
Thanks for your review! I'll definitely keep your comments in mind when revising this piece in the future.
Jun 15, 2019