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  • Article / Essay » General, Politics Re: Dogmatic Desensitization to a Damning Reality

    I feel like no matter what I put in this review, I'll be unable to get across how much this piece amazed me, and how moving this is. I'm not ...

    Nov 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Five

    *gapes* Even Elena has no idea how the school works?! Uh oh, that can't be good. I really liked this chapter too! Then again, I always like this story. So ...

    Nov 1, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, Other Re: Music?

    Hello! First things first, welcome to the Young Writers Society! You have a great writing style. I love music myself-that's why I clicked on this-but I have to admit that ...

    Oct 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: In Lieu of Diamonds — Chapter II

    I liked this chapter too! Chris' view on school is very true now, even though his story takes place in the distant future. I think it's funny that he actually ...

    Oct 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: In Lieu of Diamonds — Chapter I

    Hi Evvy! This is a super interesting story! I love the idea that a rich family suddenly becomes poor. Where did you get that idea? I would have never thought ...

    Oct 29, 2015
  • Other » Humor, Realistic Re: The Truth about your Thanksgiving Break

    You, my fellow writer, are a genius, and a humor master. I'm proud of myself. I can give grammar advice, however small it may be! I'll put the day and ...

    Oct 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: A Mother's Deadly Love

    I really liked this! The first thing that I noticed and: The use of the stranger viewing the situation. You don't use the words I or you, and that strangely ...

    Oct 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Four

    Oh my freaking god, I love this story so much! I love all of the trials that our heroine Margaret has been put through so far. And I love how ...

    Oct 14, 2015
  • Other » Other, General Re: Not Meant to be Read by Any Eyes

    I really like this-I mean, what? I so didn't ignore the whole, "Not Meant to be Read by Any Eyes" bit and ignorantly continued reading! Problem is I can't bake, ...

    Oct 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Be Still

    This is great! I really like it a lot. I love how you continue to repeat the, "Be still," part. This poem deals with something many people don't focus on-rumors. ...

    Oct 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Three

    Hi LadyEvvy! I've read the first two chapters as well, and really like this! I'm not someone who's good at giving grammar advice, so I'm sorry in advance for not ...

    Oct 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: ...Hope?

    Well that was certainly depressing. So I guess the original must be a lot more happier and, well, hopeful! I understand this poem a lot. You put your trust into ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Representation

    I feel the same exact way! I've been trying to write characters for stories that are gay or bisexual, but the main pairings for the book series I'm *hopefully* going ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Soulmates - Chapter 2

    I liked this chapter just as much as the last! :D Kaitlyn is awesome, in my opinion. I have to agree with Hailey on the whole independent thing. Now onto ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Soulmates - Chapter 1

    Ooh, I love the whole soulmates idea! Back over on fanfiction.net, I've seen people so it countless times with countless different ways you know. Like I believe one person made ...

    Sep 27, 2015


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