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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: The Devil's Song of Ismelda the Sixth

    Hey there, VP! I saw this work lingering in the Green Room and hanging out in the Literary Spotlight, so I thought I would try my hand at reviewing it. ...

    Jul 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Spinster

    Hello! I saw your poem lurking in the Green Room , so I thought I'd help you by getting it. First things first: I really love your poem. It combines ...

    Jul 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Health Re: Women of Christ Anonymous

    Hi, @Morrigan! It's been a hot minute since I've reviewed and an even longer minute since I've reviewed poetry, but I wanted to try my hand at reviewing this poem. ...

    Jul 10, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Focus

    Hi there, EthanHoover! I saw your poem lurking in the Green Room and thought I'd try my hand at reviewing it. Like @Haraya, I was interested in this poem because ...

    Jun 9, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: i'm me

    Hey there, @Liberty! I'm here to review your work. I saw that this poem was based on a line that came from your novel; I can definitely see the inspiration. ...

    Jun 8, 2020
  • Art » Fanfiction, General Re: Who Are You?

    Hi there, @manilla! I'm here to review your work. I admit that I've never reviewed artwork before, but I wanted to try analyzing something new. I apologize if my advice ...

    Jun 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Look, see

    Hi, Cyr! I'm here with a surprise review. :) To begin, I'll explain the reason I decided to read and review this work. While the title is intriguing, it wasn't ...

    Jun 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: avalanche of time

    Hey there, whatcha! I'm here to review your poem, as requested. :) I usually read the entire poem before I start writing my review, but I wanted to take to ...

    Jun 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: sunshine

    Hello there! I'm here to review your work. :) When I first saw the title of this poem, I assumed it would focus on sunshine as a metaphor for happiness. ...

    Jun 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Squirming Worms | Poem

    Hello! I'm saw your poem lurking in the Green Room , so I thought I'd try my hand at reviewing it. I admit I'm not sure how the gif at ...

    Jun 3, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: i didn't love me

    Hello @starlitmind! I'm here to review your work. I think the best place to begin is the title. I love how you repeated it throughout the poem; it felt like ...

    Jun 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Lost Dragon 21.1

    Hey sound! Remember how I said I was just going to send you my comments via Discord and not write any reviews on TLD? I apparently lied. :P To start ...

    Jun 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: the deep end of the pool is magical

    Hello again! :) First things first: I love the title of this poem. The best way I can describe it is that it's something that I might have found in ...

    May 31, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Fear and Confidence

    Hello! I'm here to review your poem - as promised. heart I'll start with the title. After reading the poem, it's clear that it's meant to represent the personifications of ...

    May 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Humor Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 15]

    Hi, Liberty! I'm finally here to review your latest chapter. (Just as a heads up - for some reason, it's listed underneath chapter one over on the right side of ...

    May 28, 2020


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind