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Awesome! I love how this piece is symbolic and interactive. You seamlessly translate your life into poetry terms and express your feelings through the rhyme scheme. Your title and topic ...

Aww. I love the way you kind of wrote a little bit from the gecko’s POV with how big you made everything sound. The gecko is in an enclosure right? ...

Woah. I think my brain just broke. I don’t know if Tessa is just a scheming jerk and was pretending like Bill was crazy so that he would be taken ...

I am pretty sure the “only one person who will understand this” thing was talking to me right? ;) I can’t imagine what this poem would be like if I ...

Grows: just some grammatical errors that make sentences not make sense. Like this one, “ ... told me to grab a scarf along,” this sentence would make more sense as ...

Ok wow! I am laughing so hard. I am assuming that the weird grammar and punctuation is on purpose and really makes it seem like you are rebelling against math ...

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Ok wow! I am laughing so hard. I am assuming that the weird grammar and punctuation is on purpose and really makes it seem like you are rebelling against math ...

Wow! I am really liking this part I don’t have much to say here other than where did the mean girls go? I thought they were following her. Other than ...

Okay, a couple things. First, I really love their story, I like where this is going. However, I am a bit confused, why are all the girls in her class ...

One part I am confused about is that you described the yard like, “ I opened the door to the neat, lush, green backyard,” then you have that she ran ...

Wow, um..... okay, I love your artistic developments that symbolize Chernobyl. My brain is still trying to work out what just happened and I think this could easily be developed ...

Yasss, I love this on so many levels! :D I like that the perspective is from the Dinosaur, is his name Steve? I like that you personified Steve to be ...

Wow, for such a short story you really pack a thousand years of emotion. This is really good, and either you are Arabic or have done massive amounts of study. ...

Grows: I find the transition between Alexander and The Woman not quite smooth, maybe try writing in the officer watching the life a little bit since it is such a ...

Yes! I love it. The character development is great and so far I am loving Mauve. Sometimes I get annoyed when a story is in first person and the character ...