Made_In_Demise

Hi, I'm MID or Made or whatever you want to call me. I haven't read the first four chapters, but saw you had no reviews so I thought I'd give ...

Hi there, Vanda. I'm MID and I'll be reviewing your poem for the morning. :) I'm going to start off by saying, I don't know much about poetry. I'm not ...

Hi there, BahadorS. I will be your reviwer for the morning. :) First of all, I absolutely love your rhyming pattern for this poem. Granted, this is my first time ...

Going to start by saying hi. :) I haven't been on YWS in a about a year and you'll be my first review back! So, I like to tear apart ...

Very nicely written. I actually really liked the prologue. It really got my attention and so far, chapter one looks very promising. Good cliffhanger-thing at the end...because, you know, everyone ...

It's hard to put what I felt after reading this into words. I felt sad for you but was basically in awe that you wanted to share this side of ...

First of all, I loved your story. It's so different and unique. It shows what happens to real people. The abuse and the love and how the little kids acted. ...

Okay, hi! I found the last two paragraphs (not going to count that lonely little sentence a paragraph) pretty confusing the first time I read it. Well, actually, I still ...

Not gonna lie. That really freaked me out. XD But I liked it a lot. Especially the really just drew me in. I was just glancing over the homepage and ...

Wow. Uh...this is different. Which is probably a good thing. XD Man, I thought it was about humans for a minute there and couldn't stop reading. Anyway, I think you ...

I loved the twist at the end. It was something I didn't expect and explained the whole Kevin thing in Scene One. At first I thought Kevin was the name ...

And just when I thought all 14 year old guy's completely sucked at everything here you are with your writing. I just have a few comments and a few complaints. ...

Since AWritersFantasy already fixed your grammar for you I'll just review and tell you what I liked and disliked. Okay, you really drew me in. It takes a lot to ...

LOL! I bow down to you for writing this. I've always hated this series with a passion and this was amazing. I was laughing so hard through most of it. ...