MaddieNicolette

for people to help me finish it i love the input it really helps.

Hey i loved the imput and am working on revising, i took your advice about the beautiful duckling in an ugly society, and its going to be sorta like the ...

ahahahhahahhahhahahahahahah this is great loved reading it!!! you really did a great job intergrating the songs. Maddie

THis is quite a great poem. love the blackened wings. you did a great job! Maddie

oh ok, i love it! you did a great job

I really liked this! loved how you repeated "enjoyed the copany, thanks for talking to me." i dont want it to end! :( you guys are what keep me going! ...

totally agreed, one of my twists is that she is infact a girl not a Duck, this is just a prototype and i am working on clarifying that, but thanks ...

Absolutly yes this one is just a very ruff ruff draft ha. also im working on all the suggestions about the details, just havent put it up yet. i really ...

Sooooooooooooo cute love this! im a sucker for a ryhming poem! also very true. one thing is i think you mean here, not her.

no it was really helpful dont get me wrong i loved the imput. :)

No it is not just a short story. it is going to be much more, not sure yet because i havent thought it all out. However yes i know it ...

wow you guys are great and so nice! absolutly i will keep working on it and thats a great idea to write that about the bullly. Maddie

This would be a lovley story if you continue it. i would love to read a full version. Also a very reveiling truthful story. Maddie.

Yes! i will cause it was great. also i love it. it really shows the truth. Maddie

Thanks so much thats going to help alot