MadameLuxestrange

I must say, I rather enjoyed this. Like, A LOT :D It was very short and to the point and it had such great imagery, despite its few words. I ...

Forgive me, I'm not much of a poet, but I do love reading it and interpreting it. This isn't much of a review, more a comment. I thought this piece ...

Hello there! So, I thought this was pretty good. I'm eager to read more :) I'm going to start with things that I really liked: I like your MC because ...

Hi there! I'm Luxe and I'm gonna review this for you. So, I just wanted to start of and tell you that I'm not much of a poet. So my ...

So, I'm not very good at reviewing poetry. I'm rather useless, in fact :) But I thought that it sounded very interesting from the title and decided that I would ...

Okay, so I like what you've got going here. I like the idea of an assassin brotherhood sort of thing as it could build to be a great story. This ...

I really like this! I'm not very good at reviewing poetry; I'm more of a short story/novel gal. But I very much related to this because I lost someone very ...

Sweet, I love the intrigue of the the two women fighting! Just a few things, though. Something Maria could never do: please him The comma should probably be a colon. ...

This was funny! My only beef with it is that I thought you didn't really capture Harry. You made him seem like Voldemort showing up again was no big deal ...

This was really a great piece. I enjoyed every second I was reading it. Your descriptions were easy to see in my head and beautifully written, even in the parts ...

This was awesome! Very creative and funny. One nitpick, though, I swear there was electricity emanating from his beard. This is in present tense and the rest of your piece ...

Hiya! I'm going to review this for you. Alright, I'm going to start with actual storyline. I'll get to grammar and such later. So, I like the general premise you've ...

Okay, this was pretty vague. I think that you've got a pretty good writing voice, but you're not applying it very well. You don't really have much of a story. ...

Hey, sorry I'm getting to this so late! Been so busy lately. Ash, my friend, your writing has so much improved :) This piece was very well written. I do ...

Hey Kagi! Here, as requested. Okay, I'm going to have to agree with the others that this seemed kind of essay-ish. To me it felt like there wasn't much going ...