MadameLuxestrange

Hiya! I must say, this is rather spectacular. I honestly cannot wait to read more. Your grammar and spelling were pretty much flawless and the storyline was great. Let me ...

Hiya! You've been reading my stuff, so I thought it was only fair that I come and read some of your stuff:D I have to say, I absolutely love this!!! ...

Hiya! Luxy here with your review! Once again, red is grammar, purple is word choice, and blue is my commentary. Adalyn lay on the soft red couch, unable to sleep. ...

Hiya Sakura! 'Kay, grammar and spelling are in red, word choice is purple, my comments are in blue! :D Hazel walked around her tower home, not sure what to do ...

Hiya! This was HILARIOUS! Now, grammar and spelling= red, word choice=purple, and my comments and suggestions=blue. I typed this with my friends as a joke! Comment please. Harry Potter was ...

Hi! This poem was incredbily well written! I thought that the word choice you used made it flow so well. The writing was so good that I was getting perfectly ...

Hey there! I highly reccomend: all of Ellen Hopkins' books are incredible. just be up for lots of drugs and sex. Sabriel, Lirael, and Abhorsen by Garth Nix- these are ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed this! I'm kind of a self-professed vamp/werewolf person so when I saw 'Vampyre's Horror' I had to check it out. Anyway, the story line was ...

Hey there! This piece was very sweet and had great emotion. I agree with some of the other reviewrs that there is so much more potential for this. As one ...

Hey there! I thought that this was a really emotional piece. I loved the beginning; it fits perfectly for a couple who will never see each other again. My only ...

Hi there! Alright, I really liked your story line. There were some questions I had though. Why is Stella disguising as a man? Are women not allowed to be mages? ...

Hey there! This story was extremely cute. I don't know, but I think that the part about her dad was somewhat irrelevant at that moment. Maybe add in something that ...

Hey there! I'm going to have to agree with Warriorprincess on this, this was good! I thought that you used the different styles of music well to describe someone. Keep ...

Hey there! Awesome job! The only grammatical error in here was a typo where you forgot the 'W' at the end of Yellow. The only story issue is the second ...

Hey there! You said that this was a new style of writing for you. I agree with Wondergirl, this was really well done. I seriously think that you should do ...