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Re: goodbye.
I love it!! you really express the pain of loss, and the guilt of rejecting a good friend. I think maybe you were trying to express something you felt, I ...
Jan 18, 2020 -
Re: Witches and Queens
Interesting, I never really thought about witches that way before. I like your choice of words, and the formatt is simple but appealing. I like how the last line says ...
Jan 18, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 2 - Blackout
Still sad. Like everybody is deteriorating. They can remember only bits and pieces of their lives and of who they are. I have to find out whether or not there ...
Jan 4, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 1 - Damp
How sad and tragic is this story? I sure hope it has a happy ending. I mean, everybody we’ve met are being eaten from the inside out, from a disease ...
Jan 4, 2020 -
Re: A Scandal in Gotham #2
I’ve liked this story of the ever beloved Batman. I like how you incorporated Dr.Watson and Sherlock Holmes. I found it interesting that Alfred is almost disowning Batman, saying that ...
Jan 4, 2020 -
Re: The Chase
Interesting lyrics, I didn’t know that you could post songs. I, personally, am a singer and a lover of great music. You really expressed yourself in this short but lovely ...
Jan 4, 2020 -
Re: A fantasy Christmas
This is a really good version of a christmas party. I love how you used a fantasy world. I, personally, am a fan of fantasy. I like how Orist is ...
Jan 3, 2020 -
Re: Three Wisemen: Journey Through the Stars
Oh wow. this is simply amazing!! I loved how you turned the wise men into aliens who studied the stars. I love how each of the wise men were made ...
Jan 2, 2020 -
Re: Mistletoe - Holiday Contest entry
This story was so funny. Please tell me it was a Chapter of an epic romantic novel, like Wiley claims. I love your use of dialogue, and it is very ...
Jan 2, 2020 -
Re: Dance of the Frost Tulips - Part 2
I am really hooked on to this story. There is one small mistake that I noticed, when Catherine says "They'll listen to me. Probably. I should probably do this outside." ...
Jan 2, 2020
