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MadagascarMaiden

MadagascarMaiden

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: goodbye.

    I love it!! you really express the pain of loss, and the guilt of rejecting a good friend. I think maybe you were trying to express something you felt, I ...

    Jan 18, 2020
  • Art » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Witches and Queens

    Interesting, I never really thought about witches that way before. I like your choice of words, and the formatt is simple but appealing. I like how the last line says ...

    Jan 18, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 2 - Blackout

    Still sad. Like everybody is deteriorating. They can remember only bits and pieces of their lives and of who they are. I have to find out whether or not there ...

    Jan 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 1 - Damp

    How sad and tragic is this story? I sure hope it has a happy ending. I mean, everybody we’ve met are being eaten from the inside out, from a disease ...

    Jan 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: A Scandal in Gotham #2

    I’ve liked this story of the ever beloved Batman. I like how you incorporated Dr.Watson and Sherlock Holmes. I found it interesting that Alfred is almost disowning Batman, saying that ...

    Jan 4, 2020
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The Chase

    Interesting lyrics, I didn’t know that you could post songs. I, personally, am a singer and a lover of great music. You really expressed yourself in this short but lovely ...

    Jan 4, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A fantasy Christmas

    This is a really good version of a christmas party. I love how you used a fantasy world. I, personally, am a fan of fantasy. I like how Orist is ...

    Jan 3, 2020
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Science Fiction Re: Three Wisemen: Journey Through the Stars

    Oh wow. this is simply amazing!! I loved how you turned the wise men into aliens who studied the stars. I love how each of the wise men were made ...

    Jan 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Satire Re: Mistletoe - Holiday Contest entry

    This story was so funny. Please tell me it was a Chapter of an epic romantic novel, like Wiley claims. I love your use of dialogue, and it is very ...

    Jan 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Dance of the Frost Tulips - Part 2

    I am really hooked on to this story. There is one small mistake that I noticed, when Catherine says "They'll listen to me. Probably. I should probably do this outside." ...

    Jan 2, 2020


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn