Macyblak

I don't usually read stories (I'm a poetry nerd, through and through) but your's was really (at the risk of sounding patronizing) amusing. Like, seriously, I was chuckling throughout it. ...

LOOOOOVE this story. The beginning was just enough to really pull me in. Wonderfully sculpted.

I have to agree with the overall statement that says that this is a little cliched. But, (and, yes, there is a but) the way you've written it excuses this. ...

"for only machines don't make mistakes, and artists are human." This Line. As cliched as it is, is beautiful. I like the fact that you wrote about something like this; ...

I really liked this piece, but I have a problem with this poem: The entire poem has no clear distinction of stanzas and is like one giant lump of words. ...

This: They said I could find you in the layers of years clinging to the cliffs-- I searched fervently, as gulls cried out "There! there, right between the fingers of ...

Really good piece of work; liked how you wrote about the same old topic (outer topic) with a really good twist. I liked the imagery and your poem has really ...

First Review! I loved this essay; Felt your emotions and I think the way you worded this piece was very profound. Sometimes writers forget to add that touch of humanity ...

Beautiful poem. I loved the way you spin, both me and the poem around. I found the last line particularly breath taking; maybe it's because I'm a sucker for Poems ...

Loved this poem sooooooo much! I loved the airy, impulsive feel of it. It was delivered with simplicity and just plain awesomeness. Fresh and crisp, it was like a breath ...

I'd like to start of by saying that this poem didn't really work it for me. Not only does the rhyme scheme seem unnecessary, it seems forced. What I did ...

Short. Well written. That's really all i have to say, loved these parts: Beyond the briny beach/ And under the salty sea/ I live/ Never knowing pain/ or fear/ or ...

Loved this poem. Absolutely delightful, it sent shivers up my spine. Loved these parts especially: She’s a scavenger and she lusts With mascara and a crush A place where she ...

The servant girl from the house of Marien had been invited to the prince's ball, but then that was hardly surprising, given all the riffraff the new prince mingled with. ...

While this story is amusing, I find it to be riddled with grammatical errors. I found even the Title of the story to be awkward. This story could be so ...