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Wow, very interesting; I didn't understand one word; but maybe that's what you're going for; probably what you're going for. Anyway, can't really review because I have no idea what ...

I like the idea, but there are two problems: Awkward and tooooo short---definitely expand and clean up, that will leave a much deeper impact on the reader. Since the poem ...

I absolutely LOVE villanelles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I LOVE VILLANELLES, they are sooooooooooooooooooooooo clever!!!!!!!!! And I really liked this even though I can't really grasp it

MY GOODNESS, very powerful. The person in front of me obviously can't gage emotion. Very Hemingway-esque, which is something I'm seeing alot of on this sight.... emotionally powerful, I like ...

I guess we all feel that way sometimes; like we're on a hamster wheel. I like the simple short sentences they are very powerful. Though I don't really see structure, ...

Really nice, kind of similar to a poem I wrote, so I get your main point. I have a problem with : Open your eyes. Can you smell the mint ...

This sounds like something I would write, hahahahahahahah... Just kidding. Ebony skin In ivory halls. White dusty faces. Hope aganist all odds. Sweet, sweet surrender, Why'd you just change the ...

I thought that the personification of all the different emotions had a great effect. Maybe capitalize them as well, Joy, Grief, ext. 1) Go deeper, everyone is always talking about ...

Hello, liked the word play, but the thing with the chorus makes me think that this is a song, though you can have a refrain in poetry, the opening line ...

Though I enjoy this, and the structure is great with the sentences, I kind of just sigh when I read this because all I hear is either you are pretty ...

Some of the greatest poems in history don't rhyme at all, many times rhyming limits the poem, and I think your attempt to rhyme every line here drags down a ...

Very nice, and I think this can make a good song, but it is great as it is, except for... "None of my words were chosen right"--kind of awkward, I'd ...

Very nice, great imagery that truly captures the essence of spring...even though I'm a winter person...loved the "sedimentary" word, not one that we see too often... great job capturing all ...

Interesting...I liked this, though maybe it can be longer, I especially liked the line-- "I'm a demon...I am a normal teenager." That was very powerful, and kind of captures what ...

Like it, especially the simplicity and the message, and I think the first line is good how it is, seeing how other people seem to think it's a typo, which ...