MSDavies

Alright, I can't believe I'm the first to review this. You are a talented writer, but I like to do more in depth reviews. Sorry if I seem like I'm ...

Awesome job, I like your work a lot! "This was it. I knew it was."--This line bothered me a bit. It kind of threw off the rhythm of the poem ...

I really like how you kept good rhythm and repetition in your poem. Overall, I really enjoyed it. I think it would do much better as for instance, lyrics to ...

This is a really good poem! It is very dark and mysterious, which makes me almost wish there was more. You clearly have a very strong talent as a poet. ...

This is a great start, I'm already hooked! This idea struck me as VERY unique. I've never heard of anything like this, so BRAVO for creativity! Yeah! I truly have ...

Great job, I really like your poem. It's truthful and it's something all can pretty much relate to. Bravo. I would definitely like to thank you for putting it up ...

I love your work! It is very good. Although I would like to include a quote. "You don't want me to read what you wrte. For either way I will ...

This is fantastic. You definitely have a serious talent. "Either way I'm going to hate what you wrote. Even if it's any good I'll wish I had written it. Therefore, ...

Hello, fantastic job here.(: I thought since you wrote such a great review on my piece I should return the favor. Overall I really enjoyed your poem. At first, I ...

Unlike what you said in your post, I enjoyed this poem very much. I liked how it brought me into a different place so easily. Fantastic description! Bravo. It was ...

First of all I would like to say that you are a great writer! I like how you kept your poem short and simple, I really enjoyed it. And the ...

This is just fantastic. Great, humorous dialogue. I seriously think you should turn it into a novel or something. I would definitely read it. I think it's fantastic how you ...

This is a good story so far. I can tell you've put a lot of time into writing it which makes it all the better. I'm unsure of where this ...

I can't believe I'm the first to reply, this poem is amazing. Really, you have a talent. It is very sad, but I guess that's the best part about it. ...

Bravo, this is a fantastic poem you have here.(: good job! "Was that your swords were blunt, your weapons dull" --I dont know what it is about this line, but ...