MOIMOW

Hey. The way this poem is set up makes some parts kinda hard to understand. For example... They're small,tiny,and shift. Doesn't get afraid at all those dumbs, I could kill ...

Hey. I liked the details in the first paragraph. Great simile. This story has a lot of potential, but I think it needs to be longer. You could show the ...

I once saw in some teen magazine that writers have a tendency to fall in love with their perfect image of someone, not the person themselves. I think this explains ...

Wow...you weren't kidding about the darkness. The twist at the end made the story twice as good, though. Good grammar, though the exclamation points at the end seemed like a ...

Lovely. Love-ly. I adored you character's voice. The story was great. A couple little things. At one time you say, "It was...now." Was and now don't belong in the same ...

Hey. Your title drew me in. Ever seen Wicked? It's a great play. Anyway, down to buisness. My mother always said , ‘No rest for the wicked’ troublemaker named Diana ...

Hey there! Good job with grammar, I barely found anything. Here's what I did find... He knows that Forgot a period there... Other than that there are some places where ...

Hi there. Let's review this thing! I go to a school Maine school in Maine... With that, I pulled her up, homding her against my chest Holding... Oh, reverse vampires! ...

Okay, no grammar stuff. Then I really, really liked it. Your character had a great voice and was genuinely enjoyable. She's quick, witty, and she can make great analogy's to ...

I loved this song when you decided to KILL SOME FLIES! I'll admit, sometimes I didn't understand what was going on, but then I thought about the songs I hear ...

Hello. I am here to see what I can say about your lovely poem. wearied of lifes complexities you mean the complexities belonging to life, so you want to say ...

Heyya! Very good grammar, for the most part. The only thing I found was... Oh but they sound so sweet and wonderful there should probably be a comma after the ...

Hi there! Let's get this review on! But why my hands are shaking you forgot an are... statues of angels and saints watching upon me watching over me makes more ...

Hi ya! Okay, so, straight to the review. But no, your not Prince Charming the your should be a you're, common mistake... Your you same thing... I amn't meaning to ...

I like it! Why aren't there more stories about superhero tortoises? I did notice flies was misspelled (misspelled: also a word that is misspelled almost daily) and Marvin is either ...