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Ugh! I got so mad when I was reading this! Boys like Drew are the problem with society! They get called "playas" and girls get called sluts. Okay, rant over. ...

I liked this, because insanity and I are very well acquainted. It is perfectly okay that it doesn't rhyme. Sometimes, when you force something to rhyme that doesn't want to ...

Thanks for mentioning the ages, because at first I thought they'd be teens, like stories usually are when written on YWS, then I thought she was elementry, then I thought ...

This was pretty. I could tell you bended some words to get it to rhyme, but I'm not one of those picky people who really care about that. One question: ...

Okay, fitness fanatic talking ducks...I wish my dreams had those. Good job. I enjoyed this a lot. If it were my story (which it's obviously not, I could never come ...

We all know a guy like this. I think you could make this longer. Mostly, you just bashed on the guy, but if the MC really can't forget him, then ...

The first time I read the title, I read it as I'm visiting your mom , and I was like, "Uh oh, this can't end well." And then Stacy's Mom ...

Darn it. Because of the rhyming, I thought it was going to be a happy poem. But then I read it. And now I can honestly say you have ruined ...

I loved your love poem, and that's odd, 'cause I hate love, but I love oxymorons. :) Ahh, it had a happy ending, too. That's always good. Better than a ...

I didn’t ever wake up thinking, Okay, I’m going to have creepy creatures from another dimension trying to kill me today. No. Nobody thinks that. Not true. I do that ...

“Lena, I’m going to tell you something that is the last thing in the world you are ever going to want to hear.” The suspense! It nearly killed me! I, ...

Hmm, this was...deja vu-y. I wonder why... :) (I love smileys.) Interesting and well-described. My one complaint, (I should always have one complaint, or else I won't be a good ...

Poor thing, had to move to Brookings. The horror! ;) Lena should be on our website, with all the revising she does. My one complaint (one, Mell, don't hyperventilate, it's ...

'Sup? Oh, yeah, I'm here to review. She looked behind her should er and groaned knew it was his word against hers he must’ve threatened to keep him silent I ...

Hi. You have very good grammar, (Thank you for that!) but I did catch one thing... Of course I’ll go with you,” h e said , smiling I think you ...