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really good ! I like Lena's attitude (: keep writing so that I can keep reading. You sure do have a way with words, and your character seems quiet and shy.
Hmm, this was...deja vu-y. I wonder why...
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Interesting and well-described. My one complaint, (I should always have one complaint, or else I won't be a good reviewer!) is that I'm not in it!! Where am I, huh, Mell? How much longer 'til I come up, huh? I do get to come up, right? No story would be complete without me!
How much longer for the next chapter? Huh, huh, huh??? How much longer!!!!!
Oh, and I'll complain Monday about how the romance burned my eyes, and whatnot. Just so you know.