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Hi, ehte92 I really enjoyed this poem, it felt deep and pure somehow, and I loved how you gave such a clear view of the girl's character. Very nice! The ...

I think you should take a few sentences and describe Mr. Rosster, at least to the extent of height, rough age, and density (fat, thin, buff,). Plus, how did Elena's ...

Also, Ella Enchanted was a book first too. I actually like the movie and the book both. Ditto, EAHailstone! I love the book, and the movie's cute too, but they ...

Love it! You kept my attention all the way through. You are going to write more, I hope? Pretty please? It was in this way that made Rosster find himself ...

Like Fiction said, this is great for you first poem. I really like the subject matter, and think a lot of people can relate :) One suggestion... They shout and ...

This seems like it was part of a book. If not, then I thought it was a little confusing that you didn't explain some things. By 'test' did you mean ...

Reading this made me feel so calm and cheerful, you can write really well. The way you tossed in all those descriptions without cluttering each sentence makes me pea-green with ...

I like this, it has a different rhyming system that, though to some might sound forced, I see as an actual way of rhyming and therefore don't object to ^_^. ...

Wow. You definitely put this poem in the right category- great job! I really enjoyed reading this, especially because, though it doesn't contain a rhyming structure, you still have it ...

Wow. That is like the ultimate 'my kind' of poem. I loved it! All the description and the feeling, you can totally picture the whole scene! Nitpick: "even I have ...

Hi, Naserian! Sorry I didn't review this sooner- I haven't been on YWS for a while :) Like Isha and A.S., I thought the rhymes were a little forced, and ...

Hiya! I really liked this poem, and didn't think the end was preachy at all. I agree with what Snoink said about developing the idea about what kinds of scars ...

My favorite stanza "The ships are coming in, The storm is on its way, People run indoors, They hide form its anger," I really don't have anything to suggest, except ...

I liked this, it has a fresh, interesting flow to it :D Just a few suggestions... I have nothing to do and I am lonely. I don't really think a ...

I LOVE this poem. What else can I say? I can't find anything to suggest, and so being this isn't technically the best of the reviews, because the best are ...