MJthesongbird

Hi, mjthesongbird here! Before I begin criticizing, here are a few positives. 1. This was a good story with a good ending. 2. I loved the friendship between the girls ...

This is a good poem about child abuse. I love how instead of the child doing nothing, the child is defying the abuser and slowly wears out . Usually, you ...

Wow...This is a very powerful poem. Every time I hear a child got kidnapped, I ask myself why this even happens to young, innocent children. The reality is, anyone can ...

This story is good, but there are a few things I want to point out. 1. I feel that you rushed the relationship of Gabriel and Ariel. I know you ...

Oh, wow. At first, I thought this was about a criminal who escaped prison and was going to get revenge on his captors. Instead, it was about a little boy. ...

I can relate to this because there are so many stories I want to write, but it costs points to publish here so I usually can't. :( I'm not sure ...

I think this is a good poem. It's short and simple, but it has a lot of meaning to it. It shows us how Amy waited and waited, but he ...

Oh gosh, this is a perfect depiction of America today. I hate how people treat LBGT, colored people, and women these days. I have to deal with stupid hipster kids, ...

I like the story it is telling, but there are times when I get confused. I think you should give the characters names instead of BG and GG, but I ...